This whole chapter is just basically made for you guys to cringe there you go you can read the story now!

Woah woah woah come down tiger before you read this is my version of how Star Defeats Toffee

Everything was Safe
Marco, Me, Janna, Tom, Pony head, Mom, Dad, Buff Frog

Well till

BOOOOMM!!!!!! 

"What was that?"  My mom shouted
"Dear evacuate Your friends and your Father" she added

"But mom what about you? " I asked
"I'll be fine"
"Promise? "
"Promise" she added

"Ok everyone up" I said "Star what's going on? " asked Marco
"Toffee" I answered

As they all prepared there things
"Star who's toffee? " asked Janna "Let's just Say he's a real evil dude"

"B-Fly this way" said pony head as she lead us to the ruins castle
"Are you sure this is the right way? " asked Tom

"Yes we memorized the way so let's just go"

We all were running onto the ruins till

BOOOOOOOOMMM!!!!!!!!

I caught a glimpse of my mom falling on the ground

"Mom! " I shouted as I tried going back "Dear we cannot go back" said my dad in tears

"I don't care Dad I have to go! " I said as I stated running back  the someone was behind and it was Marco

"I'll come with" Marco said
I tried to hold back tears as I saw my mom with blood

"Mom" I said "Star I want you to stay safe " she answered

"Well well well if it isn't the daughter of moon herself" said toffee on the distance

"Star I love you and your Father so Much and I want you to protect mewni when I'm gone" she said weakly

"Mom what about our p-promise? " I asked sobbing as she held my hand
"I'm sorry dear" she said as her eye shut

I felt arms around me it was Marco I hugged back sobbing I let go as I looked onto toffee

"You Monster you killed my mom and you'll pay! " I shouted

"Hahaha little girl saying big words well see about that or you'll see your friends die before you" he said as he grinned Evily

As I looked to see Marco was gone
I had wide eyes as I looked to see my father and all my friends we're onto toffee

"Now let's see who should I kill first
Is it the princess of the cloud kingdom or the prince of the underworld Tom Lucitor,my my if it isn't Marco Diaz himself, and river how does it feel playing with death?  He asked grinning

The all looked scared and Started screaming for her as toffee prepared his wand

As he pointed on to my father
"DAD! " I screamed
As the others tried to stop him Tom tried to use his fire but

It deflected Marco started using Karate but failed pony tried hitting him but missed Janna started hitting him but didn't work

Toffee blasted my dad on his arm as it bleeded "Stop Please Stop this! " I screamed

He didn't listen Marco tried to get up so did the others "Starship! " screamed tom as I saw

Monsters coming ahead
I felt anger anger rush onto my body I lost mom and I'm not losing dad

Nor one of my friends
But then I lost control

I started floating with glowing eyes and my body shined yellow as wings came out and my body turned different

My wand glowed and turned to a full Star as I looked at the herd of
Monsters and......

"Limonius Devour Entity! "(I clearly just made that up)  I screamed as they all screamed and blasted away all that was left was toffee and blood

I looked towards my friends
And saw them standing up to went to me " I'll help you Star" he said as he held my hands

Toffee blasted a powerful spell I struggled to fight till I felt on other hand on my waist

"If he is then I am too" Marco said smiling "I'm in too B-fly"
"Me too " said Janna

I smiled seeing my friends working together as my blast got stronger
"Nooo this can't be!! " screamed toffee as we all

Pushed together I see my dad resting
We all pushed stronger till we were winning Marco kissed my cheek which made me push stronger

(Ugh I suck at fighting scenes sorry oh wait not sorry! Hahahahaha thank you for bringing readers)

"AAAAA!!! " that was the last thing heard from toffee as we got pulled down of the massive force

I felt like my body was on fire as I went back to my ordinary form "OUCH" we all screamed in unison as I went onto my Dad

"Dad? " I asked almost crying
"Hehe my dear I want you to take place- o-of you-your mother an-d I " he said weakly

"Dad please don't say that" I said crying "and that boy Marco i-i need to talk to him" he said as Marco came onto him

"Yes king River? " he asked "I want you t-oo take c-care o-o-f my daughter and take place as king i-i know you'll make a good one and you will love my daughter" he said as his eyes closed and dissapeared

"Dad! " I screamed as I held onto Marco tightly he hugged me "Guys well give you alone time" said tom as he dissapeared

"Bye b-fly said pony"
Bye"

Marco grabbed my chin and kissed me I was surprised then kissed back
"S-star I love you" he said "b-but what about Jackie? "

I asked "we broke up" he said "Dad was right you'd make a great king" I said as he chuckled
"Love you Safe kid"

"Love you too mí Strella"

The end...

Yup I know it sucks sorry I feel really weird today
Oh well I made a chapter so that's fine