Ok. Here it is, my old-old-old oc. Im alnost embarrassed to show this.....
Im Being Salty Xause its MY Oc
Here we yo.

Basic-

Name: Jaelyn Raine
Really? I Used My Own Name. REALLY LITTLE ME.
Well It Kinda Sounds Like A Star Wars Name.....

Name Meaning: None
Ok, Thats Sad. But Acceptable

Age: 14
Alright, Kinda Young.

Gender: Female
Interesting

Sexuality: Straight
Straight Is Fine.

Species: Human
Humans Are Nice

Time Period: Star Wars Rebels
..... So Empire Era?  What Year?

Force Sensitivity: Yes
Classic

Alliance: rebel
Makes Sense

Rank: Jedi Knight
Wait. Shes 12, a jedi knight, she wasn't even born near order 66, who trained her?

Birth date: 9/22
I used MY Birthday but ok.

Apperance: Medium Redish-Brown Hair, Tan Dress, Dark Brown Leggings
So........ Basically Me? Great Job. Totally.
Eye color? Skin collor? And thing else?

Family-

Mother: Unknown, For The Start Of Her Life She Was Raised By Her Mother's Best Friend Until The Order Found Them
Fine I Guess, But Whos Her Moms Friend And "Them" Who?

Father: Unknown
Really?

Siblings: Rian, And Zara Raine
Better Names. More Description?

Death-

Death Cause: None
What?

Age Of Death: She's Not Dead
*Inhales*
Boi.
How WILL She Die,
When Will She Die

BackStory:
Her And Her Siblings Were All Force Sensitive And Taken To The Temple, Her And Her Older Brother Were Made Padawns At 6 And 8, When She Was Ten Order 66 Happend And She Escaped, Her Sister Died And Her Brother Was Lost, 4 Years Later She Met The Ghost Crew And Joined The Rebellion. Her Brother Had Gone To The Darkside. She Fought Him But Was Damaged Heavily.

First Off, ALL of your siblings? Found at the same time? How Original
Made jedi padawans at, 6 AND 8. THAT WOUKD NOT HAPPEN.
When she was 10...... but shes 14.... and the Ghost Crew is 14 years AFTER Order 66.      I Mixed Them Up, I Thought It Was 4 Years After Order 66.    How'd she meet the crew? How'd she find out about her Brother. WHAT HAPPEND NEXT.

Name (1/2)
Pretty Unoriginal Since Its My Name
Name Meaning (0/2)
Didn't Have One
Age (2/2)
You Had An Age
Sexuality (2/2)
Fine
Species  (2/3)
Human Is So Over-Uses
Time Period (1/5)
You Messed It Up Completely
Force Sensitivity (4/5)
Its Fine I Guess
Alliance (4/4)
Rebel Is Still Ok
Rank (1/5)
You Cant Be A Jedi Knight At 14
Birth Date (2/2)
Finnnneeeee
Apperance (0/5)
Your missing alot of things.
Family (4/8)
No Details, But I Liked The Mother Thing
Death Cause (0/5)
Didnt Have One
Age Of Death (0/5)
Didnt Have One

Overall
(23/55)
C-

Better Than I Thought It Would Do.