new story idea

This is kinda a update, I have a new idea for a story and wanted to try it out. Before I make a book tho, I wanted to see if this was a good idea. Please comment on your opinions.
Story title: people meet Berica.

Jack Maxwell.

hello peasants, I'm Back and if you didn't know that you must be living under a rock ( I swear, Imma throw this guy in a dumpster where he belongs) I'm the most popular guy in D.C High school ( Idk.) And the most popular guy should be with the most popular girl.

That's Erica Hale.

Erica is drop dead gorgeous. Every guy ( and a few girls) asked her out, but she said she had a ' boyfriend '. We all know he's fake and she's just playing hard to get.( This guy)

We both had math together and I decided to ask her then.

Time skip brought to you by: Dr pepper

Ugh ,why is school so boring. I could be doing something fun, but I stuck leading about some dead dudes. 

" FDR suffered polio and was in a wheelchair when he ran for president during the Great depression " the teacher droned. This was soo boring. ( call me weird, but I actually like social studies especially war stuff)

I was busy making a plan where to take Erica out. I didn't pay attention until the bell rang.

Finally! We are free from learning about Franklin Delphi Rose. What a embarrassing name.

I headed to math now. It was time to ask her out

I walked up to her after she just turned down a guy. She looked at me and sighed, mumbling  something. Probably about how much she likes me.

" hey babe, you. Me. Tonight at 7?. We could have some fun ( * gags*)

She had a look of love ( disgust)  on her face.

" how many times to I have to tell you, I have a boyfriend " she growled.

" we all know he's fake, babe" I said

" first of all, he's not fake, second, stop calling me babe"

" really? Prove he's real" I said confidently ( this guy is dumb af)

" he's picking me up later today. Then you can see he's real"

I nodded, knowing that she was lying ( the worst thing u can do is doubt Erica hale)

Time skip brought to you by: Cyrus Hale screaming about how much he hates Berica.

The whole school was outside, waiting to see Erica's ' boyfriend '. News gets around fast.

It was ten minutes after school ended and he was still not here. I smirked at Erica and walked up to her.

" see, he's not real" I said.

Just as I said that, a ( insert car here, I don't know any) pulled into the parking lot.

A boy about 15 stepped out and scanned the crowd. He was muscular, but not as muscular as me ( Ben has been working out more often and actually can shoot a gun with out almost killing someone.)

His eyes landed on Erica and smiled. He's began to walk to her when another boy step out of the car with a girl chasing him.

" Mike! Get over here! "

The boy just ran faster and hid behind Erica.

The girl and other guy just burst out laughing. Erica seemed to be struggling not to laugh.

" what did you do now Mike? " Erica asked.

" I ate the rest of Zoe's ice cream " Mike answered, still hiding.

" Mike, you should know are ready not to eat her ice cream " Erica said smiling.

Zoe and the guy were still laughing. Mike sent them a glare.

" come on Ben! You know how much Zoe likes her food! " Mike whined.

" yeah, but this is priceless " Ben said, inbetween laughs.

" Erica, help" Mike said.

" why? " she asked.

" he's your boyfriend " Mike yelled.

" I'm well aware that he is. " Erica said " but this is hilarious "

Zoe looked shocked " Ice queen just said something's hilarious?!?. "

Zoe ran over to Erica and and asked " are you ok? "

" I'm fine" Erica replied.

Ben walked over and kissed Erica. I expected Erica to push him away, but she just kissed him back.

I was shocked. So this is her boyfriend? I'm so much better than him!

I stomped over to them and push them away.

" Hey! " Ben yelled.

" listen kid, Erica like me not you" I said.

Zoe and Mike just looked at each other and laughed. They were laughing so hard they were crying. Ben looked amused and Erica just looked like she wanted to kill someone. ( yes, you )

I just was confused and said " what's so funny? "

" the fact you think that Erica likes you " Zoe wheezed, still laughing.

" she does! " I yelled

Ben finally burst out laughing and said " yeah, and I'm Artemis's son"

Erica shook her head and said " you have read too many books"

Ben laughed and took Ericas hand, but not before he punched me in the face.

I fell over and blood spilled from my nose.

" lets go" Ben said and began to walk to his car with Ericas hand in his. Mike and Zoe followed.

I never saw them again.

And that's how I met Berica

That's it! Reminder : this is sorta a chapter. I'm just seeing if this catches anyone's attention. It it gets enough good comments, then I'll probably make a book about this. If it doesn't, then I'll stick to this one and my other book.

Also: I need ideas for oneshots. I have no inspiration whatsoever. And please vote. Thanks for the 3.7k views tho.

Bye

kid_of_Neptune





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