The results for Taehyung are here!! Sorry for the wait, one of the Judges decided to ghost us again and has since been disqualified. Hopefully this isn't a theme :/

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Well done to everyone here! Thank you for being brave enough to enter your story and I hope you're happy with the results!

Also I want to give an extra special thank you to LAJoyner and sugararmy07 for doing extra work! This chapter wouldn't have been posted without you! Thank you so much!

RUNNER UPS:

Judge: LAJoyner

WHAT AM I TO YOU

By: AngelMisty032 

TOTAL: 71/100

Title: 3/5
You don't realize how the title fits till the epilogue.

Cover: 5/5
Based off the "Trailer' for the story the cover fits because you know its demon/dark angel related. From the description and title you can't tell that.

Description: 8/10
The description should be the first paragraph from the 'Trailer' of the story then it would have been a phenomenal blurb.

Writing style: 9/20
y/n, y/e/c, y/h/t, y/f/n, y/m/n, y/u/n, y/d/o/b, makes one head spin. If you insert a name for y/n and read the sentence in some places it would sound like this, 'Jay went to the restroom. Jay combed his hair. Jay brushed his teeth, Jay washed his face, Jay left the restroom.'
The font jumps from regular to bold to italics with no rhyme or reason or all three mixed together. It is hard on the eyes and a problem to read. Author POV tag isn't necessary as everyone reading should know it is the author writing the narrative. The writing style changes through out most of the story. There will be chapters where English grammar standard is used with correct quotation marks tagging active dialogue then you have dialogue without any marks denoting it.
??? is used as a name holder repeatedly till the name of the detective is given, then the name is used in place of the ???. It would be more story like if the ??? was replace with 'Detective' till the name was announced. There were several 'chapters' like one used between the actual chapters 2 and 3 that has nothing to do with the story at all. There are so called 'chapters' where it is a promo for the authors new book (2), another a few chapters later is for a promo of an Awards, then a few chapters later there is "Not A Part' chapter that has nothing to do with the story. Then there are the separate 'chapters' dedicated to Happy Birthday to JK, later one to RM, another promo for one of the author's books. This takes away from the story and can cause a reader to just stop reading or lose interest quickly. The writing style changes back to normal in Chapter. 3 and dialogue has proper quotation marks. Then it changes again in chp. 5. Vocabulary is simple till later where it seems a different mind is writing.

Characters: 10/10
The characters fit the story of the fantasy genre and they evolve in the story.

Plot: 20/20
The plot is interesting and gets better when you get further into the story where the writing improves/changes.

Development: 6/10
The story starts off as one would expect a budding author to write, then bam, suddenly it reads as if an experience writer has taken over and the story become more exciting and engaging.

Pacing: 5/10
The pacing of the storyline was slowed and sometimes completely stopped by 'chapters' not related at all to the story.

Final Impression: 5/10
The first half of all the 'chapters' done seem to be that of an inexperience author, which the author does state this is new to them. The story has many 'chapters' that are not story chapters but birthday greetings to member of BTS, self story promotions (2) and Award promo or just something the author wants to say, yet none of it relates to the story. I found this story very difficult to want to continue reading with the disruptive chapters that were not chapters of story. The Grammar and punctuation and writing style hurt this story. But then a miracle happens in later chapters where grammar standards are used and the writing flows perfectly, and the sentence and paragraph structure is correct and the vocabulary used has greatly improved. . . such a sudden and drastic change from the previous chapters makes one wonder what happened . . .?

Judge: LAJoyner

ECHOES OF EUPHORIA

By: Etaereal3012

TOTAL: 71.9/100

Title: 4/5
The title is very pretty but I couldn't find how it fits the story, unless it's the one line where she sings the word Euuuupphooira.

Cover: 4.9/5
The cover is pretty the only issue is the authors name is partially cut off at the bottom. The comment on the right side of the girls; the font used makes it difficult to read. I can't make out what it says. Wattpad has a habit of shrinking the covers, so keep an eye out for that next time.

Description: 6/10
Too much irrelevant information given and it could be streamlined making it more interesting. The "It's a story . . ." followed by five "A story about . . .", all these 'story about' things would be much better included in the initial blurb. The Description/Blurb is to tell what the story is about without giving away too much.

Writing style: 10/20
The style of writing is in script format: that is used for writing a movie script or script for a play. There are no dialogue makers such as quotation marks used and action is placed in parenthesis. English grammar standard is not followed for properly constructing this story. There are past and present tense issues within the story. Incorrect word choice, 'leaved' (I just leaved home.) should have been 'left' (I just left home). Some AI programs that are used to help write a story have trouble using correct pronouns of he her. Ex: He cleared her throat so he could speak. There are other signs of an AI program, by using words repetitively. Ex: eye is used 5 times in three lines. Princess is used multiple times in just three lines. I'm not sure if these issues are from a translation to English app or an AI app.
In many places where there is dialogue, the dialogue doesn't sound natural. It doesn't read as if that is how someone speaks called, "Stilted Dialogue." This can be looked up online for further information. Many sentences are chopped into very short pieces where they would be better suited into one for smoother reading. There are some incomplete sentences as well. In Chapter 10 you suddenly get correct grammar with dialogue in quotation marks but now the dialogue is in italics. The writing goes from normal font to italics and bold, without reason. It makes it hard on the eyes.

Characters: 8/10
The lead character matures by a very slightly noticeable difference as the story progresses, other than her dream coming true. Her friend seems to fall to the wayside with little to no growth.

Plot: 20/20
The plot is two girls from India having their dreams come true.

Development: 8/10
Author POV interrupts the flow and development of the story explaining things about the characters/story as if to clarify what they wrote or summarize what they were trying to say. There is also a Flash Back after a long overly romantic speech Taehyung gives. The flash back feels out of place, as if it was thrown in as an after thought, to explain why his speech was recorded and he wasn't actually standing beside her as the speech starts out, "As we stand here." Since this story is about two girls from India there are abbreviations that may be only recognizable if the reader was from India as well, the author should include the whole meaning of UPSC, IFS, IAS and LBSNAA. The abbreviations can be used once the names have been established. This will give the reader some insight to the Indian culture.

Pacing: 5/10
The pacing gets bogged down and the story gets interrupted by two chapters devoted to promoting the authors upcoming stories and asking for votes and comments on them when they come out. Stories being interrupted by a lot of pics of headless people to show what is being worn can be frustrating to those who want to read the story. That description should be written in the story if it's relevant to the story or adds to it. Show your skills as an author and describe the dorm room, the tennis court, the type of food enjoyed instead of large pictures. Written words could be use in their place. If a picture that can not be found of Taehyung that fits a part of the story then it is best to describe the scene than to use a picture of some one who is not Taehyung. It can be disruptive to the flow of the story and have readers wondering who is that? The pictures used in Chapter 8 are a whole different matter. It is fantastic, as it allows the readers, who are not familiar with the customs and styles of India to see them. They are important to the story, more so than a picture of a headless person in jeans and a plaid shirt.

Final Impression: 6/10
The story about a fan girl and her dream idol is cute and just what every fan girl of BTS would like. But what interrupts the story continuously are the 2 chapters of book promotion, so many headless people and other pictures that aren't necessary, taking up valuable space for words to describe them instead.Writing in English needs English grammar standards followed if the author is trying to reach a wider audience. Improving writing, translating from one language to English has a lot of resources for proper English grammar writing, online, in libraries and even Wattpad has resource to help author with writing their stories. As an avid reader, I found this story frustrating to read, but it is a cute story if you can get passed all the interruptions.

Judge : sugararmy07

MY PRINCE CHARMING

By : Diyataekim

TOTAL : 82/100

Title: 4/5
It is a simple yet good title for the story, which tells that it is an ancient time story portraying the main character as a prince. Pretty decent. It fits the plot and storyline.

Cover: 4/5
Visuals and pictures are appropriately used. It shows Taehyung as a prince. If I could change something then it would be the alignment of the text (title), as it should be in the center. Alignment of the text used makes it a little messy. I will also add a small quoting line which evokes appropriate emotions of the character.

Description: 7/10
It actually gives us an insight to the main Characters' emotions. The poetic lines added to the description are beautiful. But, the description doesn't provide much detail about the story. I didn't come to know that Taehyung was a prince or something, I didn't come to know where the story will go. There are a few punctuation mistakes too. If the author could correct her description then I think it will attract more readers.

Writing Style: 15/20
The writing style of the author is something I want to talk about. Her writing style is descriptive and portrays the emotion very well. A person can feel the pain, hurt, suffering, love, hate, anger through the writing style. The reason for the deduction of points is basically the sentence formation, grammar and punctuations. For example, the author wrote, "My sweat began to escape through my forehead", which doesn't make sense. It could be like "sweat trickled down my forehead" or something like that. Another example, "I covered my frightened face with hers and replied with a smile" and also "I swallowed my throat". There are some grammatical and punctuation mistakes. A few typos, like the author is writing 'angle' instead of 'angel'. But you can see the improvements in the recent chapters of the book. There are some chapters which are completely perfect in the grammar and sentence formation. I hope we can see that side of the author more.

Characters: 9/10
I loved the characters. The main characters Taehyung and Y/n were handled with love. Beside them, Jin and Jimin seem to play a good role. And then the introduction of Jungkook and Yoongi was so well done. My favourite character here was Jungkook as he was the most genuine character in the story. Other than that the king, Soyoung, Hana, Areum were also intriguing. The one problem is why Jin and Taehyung were avoiding the throne? They both are born in a royal family, they have to take over the kingdom, then what is the reason? The reason given by Jin was not valid. It looks like he was avoiding his responsibilities as a prince. I would prefer the author to give a little more genuine reason. I would love it if the author will give a little more care to Jin. Otherwise, I loved it.

Plot: 18/20
The plot of the story is how love blossoms between a prince and an ordinary maid. How they both try to find peace in each other's embrace to heal themselves from their past. The story talks about some sensitive topics which obviously made the story more interesting. Taehyung's emotions and his past in the story was what made the story more interesting.

Development: 8/10
The development of the characters was very well done. The main characters change throughout the story in different phases which shows their development. Again, Jin's character was quite stagnant. I hope the author gives a little more care to Jin. And I would say the same for Jimin.

Pacing: 9/10
Pacing was well done. The transitions between the scenes were good and brilliant. It was a little fast in the beginning. If there could be a few more moments before Taehyung starts getting attracted towards Y/n, then it would be perfect.

Final Impression: 8/10
I loved the story, of course. I loved how the author describes the character's emotion and the sensitive topics of Taehyung's past, his fear, his anxieties, his insecurities and everything. It's an ancient story which shows the love between Taehyung and Ara with a bit of spiciness.

Judge : sugararmy07

THE RAIN

By : LoveEthereal07_

TOTAL : 88/100

Title: 4/5
Lovely title. It tells that it's going to be a love story full of emotions and love.

Cover: 5/5
One word - Beautiful. The cover is very gorgeous and I absolutely loved it. When I first looked at it, I came to know that it's definitely a love story, but they don't know what the future will be. It also gives some emotional vibes. Definitely fits the title and genre.

Description: 9/10
A lovely description full of emotions and has the capability to attract the reader. I loved the quotes in the description. The way the author portrayed the different perspectives of rain is fabulous. I hope the description could give a little more summary about the story, like the character names or something. There are a little grammar mistakes so please check them out.

Writing style: 17/20
The writing style is very descriptive and the emotions of the characters are were written. The significance of small things in our life is portrayed by the author. Moreover, the author seems to have great love for flowers. The way the author describes the flowers and the nature is very impressive. Now the point, deduction of the marks is basically for the little grammatical mistakes. There are punctuation mistakes too. There is a need to understand how to punctuate a dialogue. Few typos here and there in the story. One more thing, the author is over using ellipsis(...) I know that ellipsis are very important in a story (I myself use them), but it should not be used in place of commas. Even if they are used there should be only three ellipsis(...), not more not less. I hope the author can work on this. Instead of all this, the story is awesome.

Character: 9/10
I liked the characters. Taehyung and Y/n are nicely built. Beside them, I loved the characters of Emily and Jimin. Hana, Grandma, Nana and Y/n's mom are also well performed.

Plot/ 18/20
The plot of the story is the friendship which blossoms between the main characters (I think the story is not posted much to tell they are in love, it will be shared in upcoming chapters, of course). But as the description says there will be love and later on, separation too. Right now, the story shows the progressive friendship between the characters. The rain has witnessed their first meet and will witness their separation too(as the description tells). It shows that they have started to share a strong bond after clarifying all the misunderstandings that occured.

Development: 8/10
There are not much chapters updated to tell their development. I would love to see their development as lovers and later on, when they get separated. But till now, the story is beautifully written, how they go from stangers to knowns to friends. (I would love to see them as lovers in upcoming chapters).

Pacing: 10/10
The pacing of the story is well done. The transitions between the scenes are smooth. The story definitely goes with the flow, and was not rushed, which was quite satisfying to read and feel. I loved it.

Final Impression: 8/10
Again, I loved it. It's just such a pure story. I look forward to this story for more updates in the future. This story is quite underrated and I hope it gets the recognition and praise it deserves.
Loved it.

Judge : sugararmy07

THE SHADOW LIKE ME

By : 123hikibakas

TOTAL : 91.5/100

Title: 4.5/5
A pretty decent title. It has the capability to draw the interest of the reader.

Cover: 5/5
The cover is gorgeous. It's beautiful, the font is good, visuals are good too. The cover matches the genre and the title too. Lovely.
Description (6/10)
The description is very short. It doesn't provide much idea about the story. I think if the description can be a little thrilling then it will attract a lot of readers. There are tense issues too. It suddenly changes from past to present. Please check that.

Writing Style: 17/20
The writing style is very descriptive and emotions are very well written. Writing style has the potential to engage the reader in the story. However, there are some errors. Mistake was evident in the first line of the book. It's written "Rain drops were drooling down the glass on the window." which is wrong as drooling is not used for raindrops at all. It can be like "Rain drops trickled down the window pane." or something like that. "He was overwhelmed a little." it should be "he was a little overwhelmed." Always and used to is used at one place together. "His soul was filled with young and youth." here young and youth are similar words so you should only use youth for a better sentence formation. Spelling mistakes such as "Word" instead of "world". Punctuation mistakes are prominent, "their" instead of "there". If the author can improve the writing style, then it would be perfect.

Character: 10/10
The characters were so good. I loved all the characters. Taehyung was having such a unique personality. Ari and Jisoo definitely pulled me in the story. Jimin, hoseok, Jungkook, Jin and Bora were paid keen attention too. I loved the character of Y/n here. The characters were fabulously handled.

Plot: 20/20
The plot is very unique than the stories I have read before. Here, Ari adopts Taehyung, who seems to has a terrible past. But Ari, along with Jimin and Hoseok, helps him to come out of that trauma. The trauma kicks back in after Ari is found dead mercilessly. Later on, Y/n tries to solve his past as a psychologist. The plot is just so good. I don't want to spoil the story anymore.

Development: 10/10
Every character seems to have development in the story. The author made every single character so intriguing. From Taehyung, the main character to Bora, a background character, everyone is so well written.

Pacing: 9/10
Pacing was a little bit fast but as we read the story, it all seems to work out together. The transitions were also good. So, overall the pacing was good.

Final Impression: 10/10
I loved the story. The characters, the emotions, the storyline, the plot, almost everything was amazing. There is just a need to revise the writing style, otherwise everything is perfect.

Judge : sugararmy07

THE HIDDEN BLINDING

By : bts_army7saranghe

TOTAL : 92/100

Title: 5/5
A unique and interesting title. Gives off some energy that it will be some mystery and thriller genre. Loved it.

Cover: 4/5
I loved the cover actually, the only thing that bothers me is the picture of Taehyung. The visuals are really good but when we look carefully, the picture's cutting and pasting is not satisfying. His back looks like a stiff cardboard. Still, it's not that much visible. A small quote + author's name/username will also help.

Description: 10/10
What an elegant description. I loved it. The quote, the characters, the questions, I loved all of them. These types of descriptions always convince a person to read the book. Loved it. (Off the topic, two days ago I was watching a movie about a detective and I thought what if the detective is himself the criminal and I can't believe that I got to judge this book in which the lawyer is the murderer. I was like 'Wow'... Sorry for this extra thing, I just wanted to tell you that the world is so small (∩'﹏'∩))

Writing style: 14/20
So, writing style is the only thing that bothers me in this story. It is well written, good dialogues and everything, but it has a lot of mistakes. There are some punctuation mistakes. There are a lot of typos like 'starlted' in the place of 'startled', 'murming' instead of 'murmuring', 'othwer' in the place of 'other'. Actually there are a lot. The only thing I can suggest for this is do a double check before posting the chapter as it helps us a lot to know the spelling mistakes. There are grammar mistakes such as "when we has all the evidences", it should be " When we had all the evidence". "Are we his slave?", it should be like "Are we his slaves?", " It's really horror", it should be "It's really horrifying". If we look at other aspects beside the writing style, grammar and punctuation, then this story is awesome. But this is also a judging rubric so the scores are here.

Character: 10/10
Ahhmmm... The characters are fantastic and amazing. I loved all the characters, not only the main characters but all the second leads too, Taehyung, Y/n, Chang Wook, Suho and all others. I just loved them. They are perfectly portrayed in the story.

Plot: 20/20
What a plot! It was really intriguing. So, initially, I thought that it was some action, thriller, crime but it was actually a comedy. Pure comedy.(Haha... Kidding). I just love how the story unfolds with every progressive chapter. There was not a single chapter which was boring or not exciting. I loved how the author covers every aspect including humour. Firstly, Lawyer Wee was found doing illegal work with Mr. Kyang. Later on, we found out that Mr. Shin was the actual boss " Marsh". Later on, they both died. Mafia works, investigation and mystery.
Chef's kiss.

Development: 10/10
The development of the characters is evident in the story. I love the friendship between Chang Wook and Y/n. The connection that has started to develop between Taehyung and Y/n is so satisfying. I'm loving it.

Pacing: 9/10
The pacing was perfect. It was just going with the flow and the transitions were smooth. There were some time skips which were a little awkward, but it all worked out together.

Final Impression: 10/10
I just loved it. I laughed so much because the humour combined in the story. I found myself laughing so hard at the screen. So, I will just say if there is anyone who doesn't care much about grammar and typos, then just go for this story. Because I loved it. Good work author.

THIRD (3rd) PLACE:

Judge : sugararmy07

AGENT SILVER PHOENIX

By : lamaR_Army7

TOTAL : 95/100

Title: 4/5
A very good title, which tells you that the story revolves around the Agent Silver Phoenix. Also gives us the hint that it will be something thriller, action and crime.

Cover: 5/5
Such an elegant cover I would say. It shows the main character and matches the genre and the title. I loved it. Fonts are perfect.

Description: 10/10
The description provides you the accurate information you need, not much, not less, plus telling you about the trigger warnings. It is an example that sometimes, there is no need for fancy blurbs. A simple yet informative blurb works the same. (A little suggestion— there should be a question mark in the end, so correct it, and yes I'm not gonna cut the marks it's just a question mark)

Writing style: 19/20
I loved the writing style of the author as it was descriptive and imagery. The thing I like the most is the least amount of grammar mistakes. I would say the grammar was almost perfect. There were some little mistakes which I would like to address. Some punctuation mistakes were there as there was no question mark at certain places, some words were omitted/missing, accidentally of course. Some spelling mistakes/typos like 'wondering' instead of 'wandering', 'sent' instead of 'scent', "I prefer being in a fighting" should be "I prefer being in a fight" and "which means their back" should be "which means they're back". One more thing I would say, if you are using ellipsis(...), it should be just three (...), not more, not less. I had to read very carefully to spot the mistakes as the mistakes were not that obvious. So, keep it up, author.

Character: 10/10
The characters were made with so much love and care. The main characters, Hana and Taehyung, were perfect. Besides them, Minho, Jimin, Haerim, Jisso and Minji were able to draw my attention. I would say that the characters perfectly fit the genre.

Plot: 18/20
The plot was about Hana trying to find the 'shadow kings' while hiding her identity as a secret agent by pretending to be a normal highschooler. It draws the attention of the reader as they read the book further. It gives us action, mystery, crime, mixed with friendship and love. So, yeah... The plot is quite interesting.

Development: 9/10
The characters' development is visible throughout the story. I love how Tae and Hana become unknowns to enemies to friends, and I think we will see them as lovers too. Plus, the chaotic relationship between Hana and Minho is quite interesting. There were some times when I was smiling at the screen while reading the story. So, I absolutely loved it.

Pacing: 10/10
The pacing was perfect. It just goes with the flow without any rush and hurry. I absolutely love those stories which flow without any rush. The author really knows how to set the mood.

Final Impression: 10/10
I absolutely loved the story. The story is well written, showing various emotions of the characters. This story is quite underrated, I would say. This story deserves much more, sometimes it just becomes difficult for the author as the response is not much. I hope everyone can check this story out. Well done, author. I loved your story.

SECOND (2nd) PLACE:

Judge: LAJoyner

ART OF A BLEEDING HEART

By: strawberry1d

TOTAL: 96.8/100

Title: 5/5
The title is perfect for this story.

Cover: 4.9/5
My first impression, given the title with this cover, was this story is a vampire story. The cover gives that vibe.

Description: 10/10
The description is good, it gives you a glimpse into Taehyung's thoughts then the next part finishes pulling you in to read the story. Well done.

Writing style: 18/20
The writing style was pretty consistent. There were some sentences where it seemed words were missing. Ex: Look at your mournful expression as you stand still at Taehyung's bed. (Who looked?) 'Taehyung captured numerous of the same images recently'. (Numerous what?). There is a sentence that is confusing, Ex: As tears streamed down your pale cheeks, your eyes began to tear up. (She already had tears falling.). 'You're' needs to be placed instead of 'you' in the following sentence when the dad speaks. "You home baby . . . you home." Quotations for dialogue should also be used when active speaking dialogue is occurring over the phone, those were missing. Chp. 3 first paragraph, '...you had thrown on one other' should be; 'you had thrown on each other OR you had thrown on one another'. There is a large blank gap that is interrupting the story flow, just use one of those pretty bars to separate the scene transition instead of the large blank gap. It will look prettier and close the large gap. She is capitalized several times through out when not at the start of a sentence, occasional sentences started with no capitalization. "But when" should be 'because' to make the sentence of why her dad says he understands her agony. 'But when' leaves the reader waiting for the 'but when' (what?), to be explained. Where the word 'because' fits as it leads into the sentence that lets you know. I hope that made sense. There is a question mark where she tells her dad to have her brother pick her up. It was said, not asked, so no question mark is necessary, there were a couple of instances where a question mark is used in place of a period where no question was asked. Most issues seem to be something that could be found upon proofreading.

Characters: 10/10
The characters are well written and change with the flow of the story. They keep the reader engaged through out.

Plot: 20/20
The plot runs well for this type of fan fiction love story. Well done.

Development: 10/10
The development of the storyline and the plot along with the growth of the characters is very engaging. There are smooth transitions between the characters and their side of the story, (other than that large blank gap). The author does a good job of evoking emotions from the reader.

Pacing: 9/10
The pacing is affected by that large gap and many pictures, like the airport traffic control tower, that could have been left out as it wasn't relevant to the story or detrimental if it was not there. The hospital room picture works in the first chapter showing how luxurious Taehyung's hospital room is but it is repeated in the next chapter and it seems out of place as the room isn't being discussed or described.

Final Impression: 9.9/10
Great story and it wasn't a BTS vampire story as the cover seemed to imply. Once you know the story isn't about vampires you see the cover in a whole different light and it is beautiful for the story. Other than those thing mentioned in 'Writing Style' and a few similar issues through out the story, it was a wonderful story to read.

FIRST (1st) PLACE:

Judge : sugararmy07

WHEN HIS HEART FELT LOVE

By : ViniShah2

TOTAL : 98/100

Title: 5/5
A lovely title. It fits the genre perfectly. The title depicts that it's going to be a romantic story. A classy and decent title.

Cover: 4/5
The cover is very beautiful, as it is very colourful and is visually appealing. I think the fonts can be better. I don't know but at the first glance the cover looks a bit messy and overdone. I think the author should look at the colour theme for the fonts, besides that it's good.

Description: 9.5/10
The description is lovely, and provides just enough of the story. The quotes used are also interesting. It also gives warnings and tells about the themes of the story. Still, it feels like something is missing, maybe a little description about Taehyung will help.

Writing style: 19.5/20
Perfect. Just perfect. Grammar, perfect. Vocabulary, perfect. Punctuation, perfect. Dialogues, perfect. And whatnot? I tried to find mistakes, but couldn't. There are only a few mistakes, which normally happens while writing. For example : " I have taken a break for these two days and so I asked him to stock some food here." It should be like "I have taken a break for these two days, so I asked him to stock some food here." One more is "What if he hurt me again?" it should be "What if he hurts me again?" There are very few mistakes. The author expresses every emotion so beautifully. I loved it as the author has written 96 chapters so beautifully and perfectly. I just loved your writing style. Keep it up, author.

Character: 10/10
You ask me why? Because it deserves it. Every character in the story has its own existence, tastes and style. I loved how the author made her characters filled with flaws, because any human being is not perfect. This just made the story more realistic, and guess what, I'm a big fan of realistic stories. Just loved it. Jia, Ji-hu, Taehyung, Yoongi, Jungkook, Jimin, Jin, Taehyung's parents are just beautifully and elegantly written. I can't even choose my favourite here, because they all are just so good.

Plot: 20/20
A beautiful romantic story where Taehyung seeks forgiveness from Jia, as he played with her feelings and left her when she was pregnant, married her just for the sake of his career. Yoongi plays a major role here as he tries to find the right partner for her sister and a great father for his nephew and he sets his eyes on Jungkook for that, and Jungkook loves Jia too and Jia is ready to give Jungkook a chance for the sake of his brother. Will Taehyung be able to get her girl back after making her suffer? Ugh... Can this story be any more interesting? Lovely.

Development: 10/10
As I already said, the author portrays the emotions of the characters perfectly, which absolutely contributes to the development of the characters. The way Taehyung realises his mistakes and craves for his ex-wife and his son, while Jia is still not able to erase her love for him is so satisfying. Not only the main characters, but the author also focused on the other characters.
Just a chef's kiss.

Pacing: 10/10
The pacing is perfectly done and the transitions are so well done. I know the story is very long, but the pace is justified. No rush, no hurry, it just goes with the flow.

Final Impression: 10/10
Lovely story. Can I just say that this is worth making a kdrama? Because it is. I recommend everyone to check out this story and give it more recognition. It deserves much more. Loved it.♥

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