Ok, I have nothing against this story. Like at all.  I'm only asking this because out of all of my stories, THIS one story has the least attention and it seems like that many people don't even look at it,  let alone read it. Accept for a select few.

When I made this story, I had hopes that it would be the next big thing that wasn't a book related to any of my Re:zero books or my Straw Hat Deku book(Which I will get back to writing soon for you straw hat Deku fans.) I was going to make three arcs based on the classic games as to give the three human characters their own origins and arcs before getting into the splatoon content. But not that many people see it. I even asked this exact question in a community post and no one answered.

So I'm asking this now, does this story need a rewrite, or is it fine as it is, or do I need to drop this book completely? Because I'm getting tired of putting all of my time and effort into a chapter or an idea for this book, only for it to flop.

Anyway that's all I have to say. Just a little mini rant. You all have a good day or night wherever you guys are currently.