Username: @example_welovebts

category: Jungkook
Book title: example the lovers lane
Book author: @example_BTSisthebest

Book cover: 6/10
The cover is simple picture that I've seen a lot of people use, its a nice picure but it doesn't stand out. The title has nice font and looks beautiful, but there is no author name. Since it's a generic picture it doesn't give me any idea of what the story genre might be from just looking at the cover. 

Title 8/10
The title is creative and unique, I haven't seen it before. It would get attention and makes me curious to read the book. The font is nice readable, but using Jungkook/jjk/ X readers in the title makes the title really long while the title of your book is actually quite short. 

Description 10/20

The description is too short and doesn't give me an impression of the story, after reading it I still have no idea what the story line is going to be. Or what the subgenre is of the book, I don't if I'll be reading a romantic, scary, angsty, fantasy story. The description is only made of a simple quote from the story. Eventhoug it's very poetic and it sounds very nice, it doesn't describe the story. It also has grammatical errors, the i is not capitalized and it should be you're instead of your. I wouldn't read the book based of the description because I have no idea what it is going to about? There are thousands (if not millions) of BTS ff books, if I can't figure what the book is about after reading the description I won't read it. There are enough books out there which do have full description. 

First Impression (First 3 chapters) 30/40

The first chapter was really intriguing and the cliffhanger at the end made me really curious for the next chapter. I immediately was hooked on the story and wanted more. However, the second chapter doesn't really explain the cliffhanger of the first chapter and left me hanging with a lot of questions. Also there are a lot of characters being introduced in the second chapter, throwing a lot of information on the reader in one go which makes the story confusing to read. The plot however is very creative and I haven't read anything like it before!

Writing, grammar, and vocabulary 10/20
There were a lot of spelling mistakes, typos, words writing wrongly, verbs conjugated in the wrong way. This made it sometimes confusing to read the story. Some sentences were also very long and your story could benefit from splitting some sentences and make easier to read. What however is fascinating is that the vocabulary is very advanced, but some words are used in wrong context. It's okay to simpler words, instead of using a word when your not sure of its meaning. It doesn't have to look fancy. The word use therefore doesn't really match with the story. the punctuation of the dialogue is also very wrong! you do not write dialogue like Jungkook: Blah blah
Taehyung: Blah blah
This is very impersonal and get's boring really quickly. If you write dialogue you need to use '' where you put the text the person is saying after it you use a dialogue tag like, Jungkook said. This will also bring more emotion in the dialogue since you can use so many different options like Jungkook explained, Jungkook hissed, Jungkook stammered, Jungkook ranted, Jungkook grunted, Jungkook chimed, Jungkook repeated, just to name a few. It might be a bit complicated in the beginning but it will really compliment your writing when you get the hang of it. Since the dialogue is written like this it really feels like reading single sentences instead of a story. 

Total score: 64/100
cover:6
title: 8
description: 10
first impression: 30
grammar: 10

Disclaimer! This is just an example and  based on any particular book. Any similarities to any books is just a conincidence.