I know I only have the prologue up, but if you want you can put a rating from 1-10 of how much you liked it or hated it, and you can leave a commentary if you want telling me where I went wrong, or if I misspelled. I'm open to suggestions, since it's based on a disease I don't have, though I have done as much research I can on this disease plus other health conditions that will be introduced!
If you are wondering why Celia is laying like that in the prologue, since it's not a spoiler alert, I have actually a funny reason for it. In school, the library was closed and I didn't want to move from the spot near the elevator, so I laid on my back and put put my legs up on the wall. You can only imagine the expression on the vice principals face as he walked through the elevator. He gave me the most hilarious face! So I thought it would be funny to add it in.

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1 being that you hated it, and 10 being that you loved it.

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I want you guys to guess what Zoba's backstory or at least have an idea on it, and it's going to come up soon. Zoba is the creature if some of you couldn't guess.

What I've Done by Linkin Park

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Gasoline by Halsey

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Zombie by Cranberries (Cover by Bad Wolves) Scroll Down

Also, if you were wondering what the songs are that I kind of used to make this story, here you go!

Fire on Fire by Sam Smith

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Zombie by Cranberries (Cover by Bad Wolves)

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Feel Invincible by Skillet

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Superheroes by The Script 

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Not Dead Yet and Warrior both by LEDGER
Not Dead Yet is where I got the idea for Celia and Zoba, and it talks about breaking boundaries.
The main idea for Celia came from it.

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Get Up by Shinedown

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