Title : Come As You Are (Rewriting/ # Wattys 2016)

Author : My_life32

Synopsis : What happens when love and power join forces.

Jasier is the most powerful wolf that ever live, but she doesn't know that. There are two know groups of wolfs that held power, The Color Wolves, and Dark Wolves. With the natural purple hair, Jasier has always been unique. Now finding out being a color wolf after the dark wolves kill her parents. She plans her revenge with her color mate Ira. Will she be the color wolf that she was destined to be or will she also fall like her parents. They're the last two remaining of the color wolves. She's the strongest of them all. What length will they go through to find out the truth, but what if the lie wasn't far off from the truth?

Status : Ongoing, 5 chapters at time of review

Link : https://www.wattpad.com/story/56945906-come-as-you-are-rewriting-wattys-2016

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For this story I must stress that since there are only 5 chapters, and that each chapter is roughly five minutes, I am barely scraping the surface. Hence I can't really say whether it's good or bad yet. No wait, cancel that last sentence. Belay that order!

I can tell you that it's not bad. Funnily enough the spelling errors in the book doesn't bother me very much - maybe I'm getting used to it haha. It's running pretty smoothly so far, and the conflict between the two kinds of wolves is already explained to the reader. What I cannot see - again I stress, SO FAR - is the element that makes it stand out from other werewolves stories. Simply because 5 chapters is too little for me to decide if this book is awesome or not.

So far the only gripe I have is spelling and that's it. No plot holes and illogical reasoning so far. 

In conclusion, it's up to you to take the risk. Plunge headlong into it, and hopefully you find some love. And I do apologize to the author, I feel as if this review isn't helpful at all. Maybe I should have done it after you wrote more haha.

Wrap it up now - stars or stones? Too early to tell?

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Disclaimer : This review is not a personal attack on the author, and is merely a reader's honest opinion. No offense is meant.