Title: Life's Symphony

Author: fangirl4eva21

Review:

1. Cover-

a) Positive Aspects-

- Color combination

- Imagery

b) Parts which need improvement-

- Text style

- Half side color of headphones

- Highlighting of the heading

- Author's name expression

- Aesthetic sense

c) Suggestions-

- Usage of fancy font styles like Jokerman, etc.

- The other half of the headphones could be converted to a peach color.

- You can add a shadow or cloud effect to the heading to give it a serene significance]

- You should simply put your username rather than specifying an attribute of the story.

- Addition of a little something in the background or corners, you can relate it to the characters or something like that.

2. Title-

a) Positive Aspects-

- Intriguing words

- Aesthetic Appeal

b) Parts which need improvement-

- Relation to the character

c) Suggestions-

- Maybe it's just me but your title suggests the story to be non- fiction wherein you explain how music is related to life using real-time attributes and technicalities, this can be altered.

3. Summary

a) Positive Aspects-

-Introduction of the main character

-The backdrop of the story

b) Parts which need improvement-

-No suspense left

-Too much explanation ( impersonation of character and repetitive grammar)

4. Suggestions

-You have unfortunately given out the ending of the story in your summary itself, this decreases the probability of readers' interest in reading further.

-You must reduce the number of things written, try a twisted way, and introduce through poetry or in music's language to add a surprising element.

-Try not to put forth your hopes and aspirations for the story here, you can do so in an A/N in between chapters.

-The repetition of 'realized' in the third part must be altered. Usage of too many adjectives in a single sentence can be amended.

Other than that the chapters were quite interesting and the rhyming scheme in the 1st chapter was pretty awesome.

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~theloner