Title - Seeking A family by strong_and_free1

Title 05/05

Book Cover 03/05

Blurb 06/10

Character Development 09/10

Genre Relevance 05/05

Plot 09/10

Story flow 10/10

Grammar And Spelling 07/10

Writing Style 09/10

Interaction With Readers 05/05

Vocabulary 09/10

Overall Enjoyment 10/10

Total 86/100

The title is simply perfect, well done! It fits the plot perfectly and the cover is simply a pro, the child on the cover was the masterpiece! The title on the cover, however, is dull. Vibrant colour and different font styles would enhance the attraction and hell, it doesn't even have your name on it.

The cover is the first thing that a reader notices so I suggest you find a designer to make the appropriate changes, the background however was perfect.

The second thing that a person notices was the blurb, if your blurb is interesting then the rate of the readers will certainly be exceeding over time.

Some negatives to the blurb - The first paragraph was incompatible, the plot was amazing author so please write your blurb accordingly. A small suggestion - pick the crucial part of the plot/ a conversation perhaps add that as the blurb and ask your readers the question about the life of your protagonist, ask them does he deserve the trial or not, make it more creative and mysterious.

Positive- character developments were perfect, the world-building is amazing and the description was simply a pro!

Negatives - 1. the emotions were lacking, the settings were described perfectly, their actions too were perfect, the emotions were the part where writer lacked describing at, make the readers cry, laugh and marvel with your character's thoughts.

2. The punctuations were often misplaced, for

eg - (extract from your chapter)

'I...I was just trying to look at their prices, sir.'
the boy answered frightened.

(It should rather be)

"I... I was just trying to look at their prices sir," the boy answered frightened.

There should be a space after the punctuations and if it's a run-on sentence, it should be placed with a comma rather than a period before the quotation marks. In case if the saying was the end of the paragraph then the period will be the applicable one before the quotation marks.

An example of the same extract in another format

"I..." He stuttered and continued with fright clear on his eyes, "I was just trying to look at the prices, sir."

There you go, that's writing with emotions (none of this is written to offend the writer)

The grammar was good, the tenses were sometimes confusing at some places, but it was very trivial that couldn't get noticed, nothing good proofreading cannot solve.

I could literally feel the building tension and their pitiful state while reading, the interaction was just great and it would be amazing if we could read a little more emotions than actions in the flow of the story.

No plot holes- well done!

I would definitely continue it if life offers me time!

The writer may think that your review is relatively smaller than the previous reviews, the reason is - the lesser the mistake, the lesser the complaints!

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