Please tell me what you think of this it's a fan fiction for school.

Once upon a time and they lived happily ever after, these ten words start and end every story. But what if this isn't how the story really goes.
In the land of Sleeping Beauty three years before Aurora was born.
"When you give birth since you need an heir to the throne don't invite me to the child's Christening. I will pretend to get really mad and curse the child. That will force the last sister to save the child because they don't want to look like jerks in front of the whole kingdom. I will use a code name maybe Maleficent and my skin will be green or something like that,"Ayrabella said to twin sister,the queen.
"Then Stephen would get mad at the enchantress so you couldn't live in the castle with us any more,"Queen Eleanor replied.
"I can stay in the old castle,"
"Maryweather,Flora, and Fona demolished it before and killed Stephen's parents and sister and our mom they also killed they could do it again."
"They also killed the two surrounding kingdoms also Quit being the over protective little sister also no they won't  if they don't know I'm there." Ayrabella replied.
"Bey Ayrbella," Queen Elanora said.
"Bey Eleanor don't forget to let me know when. you are pregnant ,so then I can work on the spell,"Ayrabella replied.
Then the two sisters hugged and Ayrabella then left the castle.
Present time one year after Aurora woke up
" how could it gone so wrong," Ayrabella said to her self.
Maryweather,Flora, and Fona just kidnaped The king and and Queen Eleanor and prince Philip. A little while later Aurora came in the the throne room. But Ayrabella was in the throne to try to find any clues to find her sisters. But one she looked up and so Aurora there she was so surprised to see her. Ayrabella thought why she isn't she looking for her parents.
"What are you doing here?" Asked Aurora.
Ayrabella thought for a moment she is most likely look for Eleanor as well. Then she relized that the unrecognizable/Maleficent spell was still on me.
"I said what are you doing here."
" I am your Aunt,"
"Noooo your not." Aurora said in disbelieve.
"Wait I am sorry I  I put this spell under myself by the way,"
Then the Ayrabella changed her green sink white, her black hair dirty blond, her eyes Violet,and her horns disappear.
"You look just like my mom," Aurora said while she was crying.
"Yeah we are twins also I have a hunch of who took you parents and the prince."
"Who?"
"Your other three aunts that you spent sixteen years of your life with."
" Really," Aurora said in disbelief.
" yeah THEY where the reason why I put you under the Sleeping cures. But I am so sorry," Ayrabella replied.
"Umm I'm still not so sure I trust you. Even though you look just like my mom."Aurora stated.
A few day later Aurora called Ayrabella to the castle because Ayrabella was going door by door checking to see if they saw them.
"Ok I trust you lets go,"Aurora said eagerly.
"Okay let's check the forest first since I already checked the village.Ayrabella replied.
Then a few minutes later they stared to walking in to the forest and Aurora grabbed one of her mom's old bow and arrows before they left.
"Where did you stay for the sixteen years I was with THEM," Aurora asked her aunt.
"I stayed in the old castle trying to find away to defeat THEM," Ayrabella replied.
"I just picked berries all the time,"Aurora stated.
Then they just keep talking and walking in the forest bet the they ran in to a bright pink and blue Phoenix.
" THEY sent him," Ayrabella yelled.
"I going to kill THEM once I find them," Aurora said.
Aurora once she saw the Phoenix she grabbed her bow and arrows and sprinted in to action. She stared firing one at a time but she was have a hard time using it since it was her first time. Has soon as she got use to it though she was a sharp shooter. On her third try after she got use to it she hit him right in the eye and that killed the Phoenix. Then Aurora stared crying because she has always loved animals and she just killed one. It's because of them she keep thinking to her self. Then Aurora looked down at her tan and black dress and so that it was all ruined and her blond hair was a mess. Then they walk until night fall then they made camp by a stream and fell asleep. Then in the morning Ayrabella and Aurora started walk to find them. They didn't end up finding them for seven days. When they found them Aurora then tripped over something then they checked out what it was and it was a cellar door.
"It's locked,"Ayrabella said.
"I got this," Aurora replied she then grabbed a stick and use some feathers to pick the lock.
" Mom dad," Aurora said while hugging them
" Eleanor," Ayrabella stated while she was running to her sister.
"I have see you in seventeen years," Queen Eleanor stated while crying.
Then Aurora noticed a sword in the front left of the room so she grabbed it.
"Where is Prince Philip?"Aurora asked.
" Maryweather killed him," Eleanor said.
" No, I can't be," Aurora asked with a sad voice.
"Yes is it he was trying to get out, And that just won't do," Maryweather replied as her and the other fairies came in.
Aurora ready her bow gave Queen Eleanor the sword and Ayrabella got her magic ready.
" I got Maryweather," Aurora said with strength in her voice.
"I will get Fauna," Eleanor replied.
" I got Flora," Ayrabella said.
Then Eleanor kill Fauna by slicing her in half.
Eleanor then went to help Aryabella. Because Aurora just shot Maryweather in the eye and in the heart. Blood gushing from Maryweather's dead body. So then Aurora went to help her mom and Ayrabella.
"Noooooooooo," Ayrabella and Aurora said at the same time as Queen Eleanor's body hit the ground.
Aryabella froze she just saw her sister after seventeen years of not seeing her. But there she lay dead. Then she stared bawling like a baby. Aurora was also crying but not as much she was still fighting Flora.
" you are just a dumb,WEAK PRINCESS," Flora said.
" you shouldn't underestimate her she has exquisite aim," Ayrabella replied.
Then Aurora shot her arrow at Flona's head and then she died . Aurora's dad picked up the sword and killed Ayrabella.
"Why would you do that," Aurora asked.
" She kill your mother and put you under the sleeping curse,"
" NO SHE DIDN'T SHE TRIED TO SAVE HER," Aurora exclaimed as she stormed off. She ended up living in the old castle where Aurabella once lived.
Leaving King Stephen to rule the now broken kingdom all by him self.