Hello and welcome to another rotation. I'd like to thank you for being extremely punctual and giving excellent feedback during the previous rotation.

Don't forget to check the first book of the month if you wish to be considered for the Best Commenter.

There's been a small change of plans and I'll announce the next best commenter after this rotation. Therefore, you still have the chance to win by giving adequate feedback. (if you know how to give feedback, skip the following lines and just go and find your partner for this week).

And how does someone give adequate feedback? Well, it's all a matter of practice, however, you can follow an outline. For example, in each chapter, you can mention something you liked, something you didn't like, and something your partner could improve. It's important to give examples. Don't just say "there are some grammatical mistakes", give one example (Trust me, that will help a lot more).

Also, think about what you'd like to know about your own story. Do you need the readers' opinions about the potential plot holes, the flow, or the pace of your story? Then, check out your partner's story for these elements. For more tips, you can always pm this account or join our discord server.

Admin: FmEver

1. EkehAnita High School Summer Camp

And ChloeLeia561 Once Hungry, Twice Bitten

2. halobrown_sa Vessels

And ibby_gal Double Iris

3. AutumnSky222 King of Diamonds

And LucyAnnWrites The Girl Who Was Afraid

4. Madame_LaBelle Zodiac Legends: The Green Dragon

And Water_Lili Bread, Love and Promises

5. Littlepearl95 Healers' Call

And AndieAreal The Pianist

6. JessicaPowell481 Daughter of Twilight

And aura_irene_ Whitethorn Academy

7. nj_amara Saving Neba

And taicardi Sex?

8. Apple_Brooklyn The Great Escape

And V_star_24 Hopelessly Drowning

9. dcocoa P, The Boss Lady

And MayaArche Outsiders

10. TheHangingMan146 Stay By My Side

And THE-WICKED-QUXXN Her Assassin

11. Siya_Stark3000 Affections

And UnfinishedDish Setting Fire to the Stars

12. TheWarden2 Monsters And Us

And Phenabeana Oracle