I should really update more on Fanfiction.net. The last thing I posted there was Mermaids of Summer. I feel like Mermaids of Summer should've stayed one or two oneshots. Or the least I could've done was rewrite the chapter so that it was a higher quality. The transitions between scenes were rough at best, it barely seemed liked they actually loved eachother, and Japan and Canada as characters didn't get enough screentime at all.

America was fine. We saw him a lot but we didn't see his thoughts and feelings. How he feels about Japan or about England. And honestly I feel like I could've written some really cute scenes. Also the epilogue was rushed as fuck. Like I wanted them to have a more sentimental experience with eachother. Like maybe talk about their feelings and thoughts or whatever. Maybe have a better flashback sequence. Also I should've really specified when in the world they were.

I think I was going for either 1700s or 1800s? Maybe early 1900s? Like there's a lot I could've done with Mermaids of Summer. If you're wondering what happened after America and Canada died here's what happened.

England's body was eventually found and returned to his family. His family mourned over him and grieved. They regretted how they treated him over the years and ignored them. They tried to find out how he died but all they could tell them was "it looks like he was killed."

Prussia eventually found all his friend's dead bodies and grieved. Hard. He buried them of course and no one saw him for weeks until they found his dead body laying belly up. Mermaids say he died from grief.

France grieved for his friend. Despite their disputes they could get along if they wanted. He started smoking and drinking more. He died at the age of 33 from failed kidneys.

Romania and Norway went back to England. They heard they had died and grieved silently with the family. They lived long and healthy lives.

Mermaids who were friends with the brothers grieved. They say if you listen hard enough, you can still hear them wailing in grief of their lost friends. No one knew the true story of what had happened so they grieved for Japan too. No one knew how Japan had killed America's love. No one knew how Canada had killed Japan in retaliation, for making his brother a depressed mess. No one knew of the relationship America had with a human. And no one would ever know.

And now imma talk about MAM. I don't like the first chapter. I made America a little bit too harsh. Like he was this serious guy who hated everyone when really what I was going for was he did want to get rid of his enemies, but had no urge to do so physically until H.Jones convinced him to do so.

If y'all are wondering the H would stand for Hitman, because you know. Hitman Jones but his real name is Henry Jones. He's just embarrassed about his name :)

Also possible things I thought after writing the first chapter:

The reason why H.Jones wants America to kill his enemies is because he loves Russia too but doesn't want to get his hands dirty, or he wants to wait so he can kill America last or get America killed last.

The reason why H.Jones wants America to kill his enemies is because he loves America romantically. Because I've seen America with the nations in the list.

The reason why America loves Russia is because of the Revolutionary War.

What if all the nations in the list actually loved Russia romantically?

What if all the nations in the list actually loved America romantically?

What if for England's death while he's cooking America shoves his face in his own cooking while it's burning and he burns off England's face making it just a mass of blood and muscle?

What if he just shot Belarus?

What if he killed Belarus in her own house by having an epic fight with her and then killing her by shooting her in the head?

Yeah I think Warrior Cats made me a bit more creative with deaths after like the 4th or 5th book in the 1st Arc had Tigerstar's insides literally laying on the floor. Yeah.

I actually have a really good ending for Mine All Mine. Either America gets killed by Canada, he fights Canada, he tries to kill Canada but fails and H.Jones kills him, he fights Russia, he fights H.Jones, he dies but then comes back in the next book(if there's gonna be a next book).

Like I've seriously never thought this hard on a story. The only story I've thought hard on was Oneshot 15: Atypical.

By the way I drew some boobies today.

I love talking about my stories because I have a platform which allows me to. Plus I love sharing all the secret stuff I never put in my stories. Like y'all should've seen the first version of Chapter one. Big yikes. I wonder if I can go to revision history, copy and paste it, and then like, change it back to the current version. Hold on lemme check if I can.

Aw I can't :( oh well. It's shittyness still lives in my heart. Also at least every chapter gets a last minute revision. Like chapter 2 got redone. Actually it didn't. Chapter 2 and Chapter one were together and the prologue was also connected with them. Also America was a bit more "I look beautiful so he has to love me!" And H.Jones wasn't as suave. He honestly reminded me of a failed 2P England x France child with 2P America as the baby daddy.

Also Belarus was stabbed.

Okay I don't feel the need to talk anymore. Goodnight!