Best Opening Chapter Results
Finally the wait has come to an end💃
APPRECIATION
I want to Specially thank the judges;
@EmrysRhodri
@CatLoverHope
@bored_mama
Thanks for making this award a success, thank you for taking your time to Judge these books.
I also want to thank all the participants, thanks for making this award a success, it wouldn't have been possible without you guys.
Note: Everyone is a winner. Remember this is just an idea of one person. Regardless of what the results says, your book is amazing and you're an amazing author.
Drum 🥁 roll..............
10th Place;
Book Title; A Night To Remember- Author Name; @Lillian_Ambrose2601
The opening chapter is interesting. There isn't a note anywhere explaining the use of Italian in the character dialogue. Having to translate a lot of the conversations outside of Wattpad wasn't great. It wasn't until after that I realized the author had written the translations as comments. Still I would have preferred strong context clues along with it to at least understand the gist without having to search. Having to translate disrupted the flow. A note at the top at least explaining the translations were in the comments would have helped at least! With the previously mentioned thoughts and the chapter's context I'm not sure I would want to read more in the present state!
Score: 30/50
Book Title; Miraculously Crossover: Ladybug and Pokémon Fusion
Author Name: @pokebug74
Did it make you want to read more?
Answer: Honestly, no. It's like I'm killing time.
Did it make you feel any kind of emotion towards the characters?
Answer: No. it felt like they were puppets. They didn't really have anything special to them; something that would intrigue readers.
Does it give you a glimpse of what you are to expect?
Answer: Not really. It feels like I'm in my sibling's classroom for a day and just sat there doing nothing.
How is the Author's writing style?
Answer: The writing style isn't very good. There are numerous grammar, spelling and punctuation mistakes. Also, the characters are portrayed in a way that nobody will be interested.
Score: 30/50
9th Place;
Book Title; Of the sea
Author Name; @Harvard_Girl9836
Hook: 6/10
Emotions toward characters: 5/10
Glimpse of what to expect: 6/10
Writing style: 6/10
Language and grammar: 10/10
Score: 33/50
8th Place;
Book Title; The new beginning
Author Name; @kelladaisy113
Hook: 5/10
Emotions toward characters: 9/10
Glimpse of what to expect: 6/10
Writing style: 8/10
Language and grammar: 7/10
Score: 35/50
7th Place;
Book Title; Zog mysticals
Author Name; @daephnix
Hook: 9/10
Emotions toward characters: 8/10
Glimpse of what to expect: 8/10
Writing style: 7/10
Language and grammar: 8/10
Score: 40/50
Book Title; The Royal Patron Author Name; @_arushiganla
Did it make you want to read more?
Answer: I have better books in my library, so I probably wouldn't, if i were the reader.
Did it make you feel any kind of emotion towards the characters?
Answer: Yes, and I like that. The author has showed different sides to the main character as well as introduced the side-characters in a good way.
Does it give you a glimpse of what you are to expect?
Yes, it does. Though I don't really think I would go for it.
How is the Author's writing style?
The author's writing style is really good. I like it.
Score: 40/50
Book Title; Glowing Sky-
Author Name; @FrennzyChaos
The flow of this opening chapter went very well! I enjoyed the descriptions. I would probably need to read a second chapter to get a better feel for the book.
Score: 40/50
6th Place;
Book Title; Crimson Venom
Author Name; @infinite_neeanu
Did it make you want to read more?
Answer: Honestly, not really. But a small part of me would read it because the plot is interesting.
Did it make you feel any kind of emotion towards the characters?
Answer: No, I think there're more actions done by them, and less narration of the characters. Though actions do speak louder than words, some description would be appreciated.
Does it give you a glimpse of what you are to expect?
Yeah, it did. It showed me that I would need some patience in order to read this book. It also showed me that this book is mostly based on events, rather than characters.
How is the Author's writing style?
The author's writing style is good. It might need some work, maybe add more strength to the personalities of the characters and use more figures of speech.
Score: 41/50
5th Place;
Book Title; Blood of Deception -
Author Name; @KurosuMiei
Great opening! The opening left me with suspense! Will be interested in reading more to get a better feel for the book!
Score: 43/50
4th Place;
Book Title; If she knew
Author Name; @nabs_xoxo
Hook: 9/10
Emotions toward characters: 7/10
Glimpse of what to expect: 9/10
Writing style: 9/10
Language and grammar: 10/10
Score: 44/50
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3rd Place;
Book Title; Me Llamo Tokio( My Name is Tokyo)- A Money Heist Prequel
Author Name; @ursulacorbero89
Did it make you want to read more?
Answer: Yes, I was curious, but not a lot. It felt like I was reading something I would've kept for when I had no WiFi and it was the only thing available.
Did it make you feel any kind of emotion towards the characters?
Answer: Yes, it showed the vulnerable part of the main character and I honestly liked it. I would've liked it if there were another character which put to play her hard life, but it was good.
Does it give you a glimpse of what you are to expect?
Yes. It tells me clearly that this would be a rollercoaster ride.
How is the Author's writing style?
I like it. I also like the cliffhanger, it made the chapter so much better. I think the only flaw is the division of paragraphs isn't all that appealing. I also think some similes/other figures of speech would go good with this chapter.
Score: 45/50
2nd Place;
Book Title; Aurora
Author Name ; @Andrea_is_here
Did it make you want to read more?
Answer: Yeah, it starts in a nice way. I would like to read ahead.
Did it make you feel any kind of emotion towards the characters?
Answer: Yeah, it briefly explain some of the things the characters had to go through, it also gives the reader great expectations and it's a great way to form a connection.
Does it give you a glimpse of what you are to expect?
Answer: Yes. I want the book to be like the first chapter. If it wouldn't be, I'd be disappointed.
How is the Author's writing style?
The author's writing style is amazing and it remind me of watching a great movie and getting hooked to it. I love it.
Score: 47/50
Book Title; Fallen Ace of Hearts-
Author Name; @JustDai_
The descriptions were captivating. The characters were very interesting! I find myself wanting to dive in deeper to understand them more. The book has a lot of promise and I can't wait to read more!
Score: 47/50
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Book Title; As The Knight Falls-
Author Name; penpatron
Wow! This opening blew me away! The descriptions and overall feeling was intense! I want to know more and can't wait to continue reading this! It was excellent!
Score: 50/ 50
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Congratulations to @thelatentwriter for scoring 45/50 but you cannot claim this prize because as the rules states you already won in another category, so either ways congratulations. 🎉🎊
Book Title; Soulyard of 1945
Author Name; @thelatentwriter
Hook: 9/10
Emotions toward characters: 10/10
Glimpse of what to expect: 8/10
Writing style: 9/10
Language and grammar: 9/10
Score: : 45/50
Congratulations to All the Winners 🎉🎊🎈
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