Inspired by the wonderful KatoKaori

Now, you might be shocked that I like Pokemon since I have so much Digimon and Yokai Watch stuff, but this was my first fandom. Digimon was the first thing I wrote fanfiction for (which will never see the light of day like my face unless I go through with my Anthony and Reinhardt cosplay ideas in which you will see my face).

Now here's the crappy oc I made to rip apart today.

Ok, first off: Ash recolor. Don't do that. There are an ass ton of bases to use. Second, back to my OP Oc rant, he has won every battle so there are no losses and him needing to improve. Third off, WHY DO YOU HAVE 2 LEGENDARIES WITH 2 COPIES OF THEM!? Dear god! If it was a glitched game timeline, I'd understand and I'd actually read the shit out of that. Fourth, Ash's twin. I've seen that so much like the mary sues I can make a fucking drinking game out of it where even Saber would die from that. 

To sum up

1: Don't recolor

2: Have losses. A reasonable one would be like 59 wins 40 losses and a tie. It's still mainly wins but there are a decent amount of losses and a tie. 

3: NO LEGENDARIES. Unless it is a game fanfiction, which I can understand, DO NOT HAVE LEGENDARIES

4: Stop making Ash's twin ocs. There as stale as Naruto's twin that the parents love....