Introducing x-Psychopathic-x's OC, Venus!

- Oh! Another Saiyan! Nice!
- Yay! Another LGBTQ+ member!

- Weakness is human stuff?! -throws crumpled-up paper at her-
- No, but seriously good on you for not making her invincible. And she isn't very good at fighting! I've never seen a Saiyan OC as relatable as this one!
- School stuff is my weakness too, Venus.

- Ah, so she's married to Android 17? Don't blame ya there. He's super attractive and he got a redemption arc. Good on you for picking the unpopular opinion!

- Okay, for the enemies list (excluding Miyuki)... Aren't they all dead? I mean, if it's an AU where they all were somehow alive, then yay! I'd love to read it if you're a writer!

- Wow! These lists just scream "relatable"! Awesome job so far!

- Good on the power level! Not too strong, not too weak!

- I would replace the last word under personality to "Patient".
- Overall, the personality is relatable and realistic.

- I think "Veterinarian" would be a better word. Unless it's a veterinary assistant, if so, then those two dashed into one.
- Oh man! I love Trinity Cross!!

- Ah. The Frieza and Cooler part explains why they are her enemies.
- Good. The way the love interest and the character meet is just so average meeting.

This is a really good OC! The descriptions were vivid and the character is relatable! Great job!

Bye for now!