Introducing cindarelle-'s OC, Momo!

[This OC has a lot of information, so this will be a broader look into every aspect.]

- Aww! Born a chubby baby! That's adorable!
- The name then roughly translates to "The Only Thick Peach", is that right? Cute!
- On that note, cute nicknames!

- Oh! A Yōkai OC! How exciting! (No sarcasm intended. I really love Yōkai!)

- Aww! A short little demon! Adorable!
- So, I did some research on the spider Yōkai, or Jorōgumo, and I found that these Yōkai usually have eight spider-like appendages coming from their back, two arms, and two legs (basically a human form). The description you gave sounds a lot like this, including the clothing she wears. However, thanks to the succubus added in, it makes much more sense, as this particular one likes to ensnare young, handsome men in silk threads.

- Her human form sounds simple enough. Not too complex, but has interesting details.
- This form is taller than the Yōkai form, which makes sense of the lore I mentioned earlier.
- Hey, look at that! I like stars and drawing too!

- Her likes and dislikes aren't too complex and are relatable! Nice!
- Little tip here: If your character has the personality of an entirely different animal than the one yours is based on, it's completely fine! It makes for a more interesting character!

- What an interesting concept with the hair manipulation! The powers in general make sense to her species and her being a hybrid.

All in all, this was a fun OC to critique! Thank you for sending in the information! And I apologize for taking so long to get to you!

Have any questions or comments? Go ahead and ask!

Bye for now!