Reviewer:
Author: KhaliqahAzima
Title: Ratneshwari
Genre: Romance
Total score: 65.8/100
Score Partition and Review.
Note: May be subjective to reader. These scores are simply a reflection of the particular reviewer's evaluation and interest.
Cover: 9/10
It's a girl wearing jewels. It's pretty simple but doesn't seem underdone.
Short Description: 5/10
Too vague. Not descriptive enough. It sounds like it's written thoughtlessly.
Writing Style/ flow: 5/10
Your writing style is too bland. Not the style to be writing a book in. There's not a lot of emotion in the sentences either which, I think, is because of the use of third person present tense. I feel like if you had written the book, say not in English but in your native language, the writing would've had a lot more character. I suggest trying to make your writing a bit more lively.
Character arc(s): 13/20
Character development for Ratneshwari was good. Weird for Shivan. Loved Dhruvan's character. Hated how you shut down the character within like 5-6 chapters. The characters overall don't seem very well thought out though. Work on that.
Plot and originality: 10/20
It was all very daily soap-ish. Nothing new and nothing very interesting. No plot twists. Expected typical Desi household drama. I don't know, nothing stood out to me.
Grammar: 8.8/10
You had nearly no grammar mistakes. That's good.
Vocabulary: 10/10
I liked the words used and that it wasn't very hard to understand either.
Story Pacing: 3/5
Too fast. Very short chapters. And lots of fillers.
Reader enjoyment: 2/5
I'm really sorry.
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