Reviewer: Nebulaxxx_1401
Book: Perfectly Unexpected
Author : MiniMoxx

Cover : 9/10
The cover is really good and it perfectly suits the story but I had a suggestion. You can add another male in the cover , Tabitha , Grey and Tyler in the cover would make it more interesting.

Title : 10/10
I love the title and it fits perfectly to the plot. In the end, it made sense why you would choose the title “perfectly unexpected” and given all the plot twists , the book was not just perfect but redefined the meaning of perfection . It was beautifully written .

Blurb/ Description: 8/10
You have described the scenes perfectly and the description was up to detail yet when it came to their feelings , their pure feelings were not described. Write it from your personal view . Anxiety , frustration , every emotion can be written in words and it must be from your perspective.

Creativity / originality: 10/10
I love your book , how it starts and how it ends , it seemed as if I was watching a show . The story was very unique and not cliche. This story was much needed to be read by everyone . The concept of pregnancy and surrogacy made it an original story.

Plot flow: 20/20
Most writers cannot manage the flow of the plot but you have made the flow of the story steady. It was not too slow , not too fast and every chapter was interesting to read. The real issues were portrayed very well.

Character development: 9/10
There have been a lot of ups and downs in tabitha’s life . At first , she was confused and hesitant but then she became clear and realized that she loves Grey . Grey has also developed a lot . The fact that he left her seven years ago and that he realised his mistake , he made himself better for her.The characters have been written very well.

Writing style/ grammar: 10/10
I couldn't find any grammatical mistakes anywhere which is great. Your writing style is professional and I like it that way but regarding the intimate scenes or emotional scenes , it is better to write more emotionally.

Genre relevance : 10/10
Yes  the genre fits with the story and I would say romance fits with it too. It could be under the young adult category as the scenes were also mature .

Reader’s enjoyment : 10/10
I would say the readers would love to read this book because every chapter is so interesting and curious to read more and more. Also, sometimes these situations are relatable to the readers.

Overall: 96/100

Overall, your book was amazing to read and I kept reading with curiosity and I felt her emotion when she was going through a lot. Your book deserves more and that's all I say. Do take a look at the suggestions and advice that I gave , they might help your book to reach even more success.
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