Title: Nausica

Author: Entionyx

Genre: Fantasy

Quick Summary: Only one chapter.

Thoughts:

There was only one chapter for perusal by the time I got to this one. It's unfortunate, because there's not too much I can say off of one chapter alone like this.

But here's what I can say:

There's no real compelling beginning here. The first paragraph is a long one about a woman on a lake - one that is also Nausica somehow? Why is she standing on a lake and also looking into a mirror? It's some weird... trippy sequence that I can't wrap my head around it. 

And then things just get weirder. It's incredibly difficult to care about a story when I can't even tell where we are or what is happening. Even once we move to the normal stuff, it's... disorienting. And then we have POV slips and it gets even more disorienting.

 Not only is everything disorienting, I also feel like there's too much in one chapter at once. There is so much going on. Normally people's problem is not getting to the point fast enough. This chapter had the opposite problem.