HAHAHAHA THIS.............IS................FANTASTIC I started laughing as hard as I could as I dislocated a persons arm, his scream was fantastic it was loud full of horror and best part WE WERE IN THE WOODS WHERE NO ONE COULD HEAR HIM SCREAM HAHAHAHA BEST DAY EVER

Random person: P-p-p-please L-L-LET ME G-G-GO AAAAAAAUUUGH

He screamed as I ripped off his arm
WHAT NEXT I said as I started to smile even wider than I was before

Random person (in head): he just stared at me with an expression of pure happiness and insanity as he started to talk to himself again.

the voices say do the.......EYES

narrator: at that moment a team of boys and girls Came up and captured (Y/N) and took him in one of the bullheads.

I woke up with my vision blurry, my head aching, and for once in my life I heard.............silence............honestly it hurt, hearing nothing, you see....................normally I hear voices, saying stuff like, "RIP OFF HIS ARM" or "KILL HER, SHE'S A USELESS PIECE OF SHIT, JUST..........LIKE...........YOU".For once I heard nothing. But then, at that moment I heard an automatic door open and a girl, walk through she looked like a bunny, "a-are you a cosplayer?" I managed to get out, my throat was raw, and my voice was hoarse, it hurt to talk, and, to top it all off my body ached everywhere. "n-n-no, I-I-I'm, imarabbitfaunas" she mumbled the rest, "excuse me?" I managed to ask again, "I'm a Rabbit Faunas" she responded. "What's your name?", she asked me, "My name is (Y/N)" I said with my hoarse and raw voice, "my name's Velvet Scarlatina. You don't have a last name?" she asked me, "............" I tried to speak but I lost all of my voice, I couldn't talk. "here I'll be right back, I'm going to get you some throat medicine" she said as she poked my nose and winked before we walked away. "what is my last name?" I asked myself as she left. "so how is my long-lost schizophrenic little brother" someone said behind me, but I don't know who they are, and I can't put my finger on the voice behind me. I turned around and I saw a girl with a giant Gatling Gun pointed at me.

"WHO IS THIS GIRL?!" I ask myself because I still can't talk, "you don't know who I am?" she asked, but, her lips didn't move "WAIT, YOU CAN HEAR ME" I asked her, "Yeah, I can hear you we're twins", she said, "Wait.....we are??" I ask her "then, why don't I know you?" I ask, "well, in short i'm your sister, Coco Adel, and we were separated when you were a baby, well, they kept me and abandoned you because you had mental problems", "So basically, I'm a mistake?" you ask, "yeah basically" Coco responded back. Then an automatic door opened "hey Coco" you heard Velvet say "hey Velvet" said Coco, "so you met our prisoner, Y/N" asked Velvet "yeah, but I was about to leave", "oh okay see ya later Coco", "see ya later velvet" they both said. Velvet gave you your throat medicine, it was still hot, but you didn't care you drank the medicine, it tasted like tea with lemon and honey, once your voice came back you asked, "Do you still want to know my last name?", I ask her "yeah i do" she responds", "What's Coco's last name again?" I ask her, "Adel" she responds, "There, you know my last name then". She just stares at me with wide eyes full of shock. Then Velvet heard something over the loud-speaker "Will team CFVY bring (Y/N) to Ozpin's office please. Next team CFVY came running in to the room, "you heard that, right" asked Coco to Velvet, "yes" Velvet responded, "Fox, get the straight-jacket" said Coco, "on it" replied Fox.

A/N so pretty good first chapter I think so, so put in the comments what you think about it so far and I'll decide whether to continue or not