《Alternative Ideas》
So, thanks for reading my fanfic. I decided that I would post the Alternative Ideas I had for it since I have a memo full.
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- Maria was going to die but then I was like "Nah, I like her so much uwu. I'll just have someone else die. Gotta keep that... dramatic tension."
- Cody was supposed to be going through an identity crisis and was supposed to feel guilty for how dishonest he was because he didn't tell the others about him not being human. But, then the first thing^ happened and I said to myself "But, if he's not human... how is Sonia supposed to beat him?" So, I scrapped that idea.
- Noemi was supposed to have a bigger arch and role overall but then I realized that I didn't know much about her character so...
- Lucia and Eric were supposed to be the least interesting characters but then I realized that Tobias was because I kept forgetting about him. (I FEEL SO BAD ABOUT THAT)
- Tobias was supposed to be the only person that didn't get physically hurt... yeah... umm about that... I forgot about him and uhhhhh I decided that he needed some role...
- Felix was gonna have a panic attack and die.
- I realized that I had most of the story planned but then I didn't have the second part planned so... ummm that part was a trainwreck.
- I realized that I was really bad at doing fight scenes/scenes where they argue so I tried to avoid them.
- Sonia was supposed to have a bigger part in the story.
- I had a whole Christmas part planned but then I couldn't finish it in time and also it really didn't fit into the narrative much.
- For a while, I thought that maybe I should make Lucia die but, I was on the fence about it. After a while, I realized that I liked writing from her P.O.V. So, I decided against it.
- Eric, Cody, and Tobias were supposed to be the only ones that lived :)
- I was going to make a lot of obscure references but then after I made that one reference to theodd1sout I thought that maybe it would be for the best if I didn't.
- David's condition is adolescence/puberty syndrome and I wasn't going to tell you guys but I just did. Mostly cause I don't think many (if any) people would get that. (It's mostly a reference to Rascal Does Not Dream of Bunny Senpai; specifically the main character's little sister, Kaede. But instead of her being bullied online I made it so then David was mentally bullying himself.)
- Felix and Cody were also going to have adolescence syndrome but, I decided against it since I kinda felt as if it was unnecessary.
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