Results for Short Story/Diverse Lit/Spiritual

These are the raw scores and comments of the following genre. Another chapter will be posted dedicated to all winners and details of how to claim the prizes so stay tuned! If there are any calculation mistakes please PM or comment so we can change it!

Rank: 1st

HUNT: THE SIN OF SLOTH by Boyprincess_2
Judged By: happysnowfeet

Cover - 13/15
Title & Blurb - 15/15
Style/Plot - 20/20
Anticipation - 5/5
Enjoyment - 25/25
Language - 10/10
TOTAL - 98/100

FOLLOWED JUDGE: No

Hello! I love how your title piqued my interest. Your blurb perfectly matches it! However, your book cover was quite too dark for the title to be seen. The image was fine. Both the title and author's name can hardly be seen. Perhaps, you may adjust the colors of your fonts. As I read your story, I am impressed with your richness in vocabulary. Your writing style was very neat too. The grammar was on point! It was so nicely done! Keep it up! All the best in your writing journey!

~

LOOKING FOR ME by @Aruvellal
Judged By: happysnowfeet

Cover - 15/15
Title & Blurb - 15/15
Style/Plot - 20/20
Anticipation - 5/5
Enjoyment - 25/25
Language - 8/10
TOTAL - 98/100

FOLLOWED JUDGE: Yes

Hi! Your book cover is so pleasant to look at! I love the colors! Your blurb and title complemented well with it. I also like how your chapters were neither too long nor too short for the readers to anticipate the next scenes. I love how you place your cliffhangers! You made me eager to scroll to the next chapters! There were just a few technical errors like missing punctuation marks such as commas but those can be fixed by editing later on. Overall, it was an interesting read! Keep it up! All the best in your writing journey!

~

Rank: 2nd

EXILE'S LULLABY by ShyGuySamurai
Judged By: happysnowfeet

Cover - 14/15
Title & Blurb - 14/15
Style/Plot - 18.5/20
Anticipation - 5/5
Flow - 10/10
Enjoyment - 24.5/25
Language - 9/10

TOTAL - 95/100

FOLLOWED JUDGE: Yes

Hi! Your book cover sends me the gloomy vibe your story exudes. I love how your blurb and title matched with it. Your incorporation of songs in every chapter complemented the chapter well. I love your choice of words! Your descriptions were on point. I also appreciate how you put trigger warnings on some chapters since it is a sensitive topic to include. There were just very minimal technicalities like missing commas but those are hardly noticeable and can be fixed by editing later on. Overall, I like it! Keep it up! All the best in your writing journey!

-

Rank: 3rd

FORGOTTEN by Queen_of_life_Heba
Judged By: happysnowfeet

Cover - 14.5/15
Title & Blurb - 14/15
Style/Plot - 17.5/20
Anticipation - 4.5/5
Enjoyment - 24.5/25
Flow - 10/10
Language - 9/10
TOTAL- 94/100

FOLLOWED JUDGE: Yes

Hi! I love how posh your book cover is! Your blurb suits it well. I love your richness in vocabulary and how you put in a mini-glossary at the footnote. Your descriptions are on point! There were just very minimal typographical errors with the indention but it can be fixed by editing later on. It was so beautiful! All the best in your writing journey!

-

DAMILOLA'S DIARY by Evergreen_Ebony
Judged By: happysnowfeet

Cover - 11.5/15
Title & Blurb- 12.5/15
Flow - 9.5/10
Style/Plot- 17/20
Anticipation - 4/5
Enjoyment - 23.5/25
Language - 9/10
TOTAL - 87/100

FOLLOWED JUDGE: Yes

Hello! I love how your book cover matches well with your title and blurb. I also love your richness in vocabulary! Your writing style is great too! I like how you place a mini-glossary at the footnote to have your readers be familiarized with such terms in your country. The character interactions were beautiful! There were just a couple of technicalities like missing punctuation marks such as commas, uncapitalized letters of formal address such as Sir and Ma'am and typographical errors but those can be fixed by editing later on. Overall, I love it! Keep it up! All the best in your writing journey!

-

Love Letter to My Scarlet by Anusara12
Judged By: Afrin_bk

Cover - 11/15
Your cover is amazing and matches the story well. But I'd suggest you be attentive about the background image resolution

Title and Blurb - 15/15
I loved the title. It sounds fascinating. As for the blurb, it was perfect. Great job! keep going^^

Flow - 6/10
The writing order is fine. But it might look better if you don't leave single lines in the middle.

Style/Plot - 20/20
The plot was so simple yet so perfect. It was just right<3

Language - 6/10
Grammar and punctuation are stable with a few minor mistakes.

Anticipation - 5/5
The story's really good and I am sure the readers will enjoy it as much as I did. You write amazing, Keep going^^

Enjoyment - 20/25
Honestly, I enjoyed it very much. It brought me many emotions.

TOTAL: 83/100

-

Happenstance Love by sarada3003
Judged By: Afrin_bk

Cover - 5.5/10
The cover is nice and it matches your story as well. But It's too simple. I'd recommend you to use an appealing cover that will make readers click and read your amazing story^^

Title and Blurb - 10/15
The title is unique. The blurb is also well described. You just need to put some info about the main characters^^

Flow - 8/10
The flow of the sentences and the gap between paragraphs are quite flawless. But some paragraphs are a lil longer than needed so I'd recommend you shorten it.

Style/Plot - 14.5/20
I see that you are new here and starting this story. The plot was interesting so far. Looking forward to knowing more. Keep writing^^

Language - 5.5/10
Your descriptions are understandable but I'd suggest you fix all the grammar and punctuation errors as they highly attract the attention of readers.

Anticipation - 5/5
Your writing skills are amazing. Just some small mistakes needed to be fixed. If you continue, I hope you will stand out the most.

Enjoyment - 15/25
I enjoyed the characters and how they met. It was very unique. And Isn't it the story all about? So you can say I enjoyed it all despite the mistakes.

TOTAL: 63.5/100

-

Strangers by slumberdesu
Judged By: Afrin_bk

Cover: 6.5/15
The cover is too simple. I'd suggest you decide on a more attractive cover for your interesting story^^.

Title and Blurb: 6/15
The title is " fine " for the story. But the blurb seemed too short to me. I'd recommend you add some more details about the story and story type.

Flow: 6/10
The flow was very nice but quite steady. And I would suggest you add more lines in each paragraph.

Style/Plot: 9/20
It was really simple so far but nice. I love the smooth pace and flow of the story.

Language: 8/10
Though you have only a few grammar and punctuation errors in your story, I'd suggest you edit and fix it. And also you can write " she/I/he paused for some mins/seconds/hours instead of putting "....(dots)" to make it more bookish.

Anticipation: 5/5
I have a feeling that the story will end well. As you write and edit and fix the lil mistakes more, you'll be improving more and more and readers will surely enjoy your amazing story. I loved it!

Enjoyment: 20/25
I enjoyed the overall story. It could stimulate my emotions. Do you know what I liked most? The best friends relationship <3

TOTAL: 60.5/100

-

Live for Gaza by shoutouttodiversity
Judged By: Afrin_bk

Cover: 8.5/15
I liked this cover very much. It describes your journal perfectly. It also delivers messages of awareness to more people about it through social media. But I'd suggest you change the color of the background image/color which may look more spick and span^^. 

Title and Blurb: 7/15
The title describes the report/story very well. But please be more detailed for the blurb.

Flow: 7/10
The writing format of your journal improved each chapter. The word choice and writing style are fascinating. Great job^^

Style/Plot: 15/20
Aw, I liked every part of those stories you wrote. Especially the doctor's one. How you did describe his feelings through your perspective! Just amazing.

Language: 10/10
Surprised to see that there are rarely any errors except few punctuation errors.

Anticipation: 5/5
I expect these stories and news will spread among more people very soon. More people will be aware of the situation and give a hand, I pray. Can't say "no" to the high hopes I have for your journal.

Enjoyment: 25/25
It was heartbreaking how they are being cruel yet playing the victim. I love the stories you wrote and described in your language. I have no words to express your amazing pieces of descriptions. It filled my mind with realistic imagery

TOTAL: 77.5/100

-

Bạn đang đọc truyện trên: AzTruyen.Top