Results for Poetry
These are the raw scores and comments of the following genre. Another chapter will be posted dedicated to all winners and details of how to claim the prizes so stay tuned! If there are any calculation mistakes please PM or comment so we can change it!
Rank: 1st (tie)
01.BLUE by enniemoe
Judged By: AvaBlake1
Cover - 14.5/15
[The concept of the cover was great but the author's name should have been slightly bigger.]
Title & Blurb - 15/15
[A unique title that relates to the book perfectly and a very captivating blurb.
Flow - 10/10
[Your flow was just perfect.]
Style/Plot - 20/20
[You have an amazing style of writing.]
Language - 10/10
[Your vocabulary is very high and I admire you for having that great ability.]
Anticipation - 4/5
[I wasn't that intrigued to keep reading all along but it was still some great hooks.]
Enjoyment - 24.5/25
TOTAL: 98/100
Overall, I admired your level of intelligence, your broad vocabulary, and your ability to express your poetic self in a stylish, professional format. One of the best poetry books I ever came across. An excellent masterpiece!
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Those Unsaid words by wild_imaginator16
Judged By: Faerie_Queene
Cover - 13.5/15
(The fonts used are different. There are three. I think it would be good to match the subtitles with the same font. The semi-transparent black was not necessary, you can change the author's name to black. Otherwise, the cover is simple and does somewhat express the difficulty of "unsaid".)
Title & blurb - 15/15
(Your title and blurb are great. It tells readers exactly what your poetry contains, and there is a link between both.)
Flow - 9.5/10
(wonderful flow, I like the rhyming and the messages behind your words)
Style/Plot - 20/20
(The rhyming and style changes in each chapter which is wonderful. It kept me riveted.)
Language - 10/10
(just right)
Anticipation - 5/5
Enjoyment - 25/25
(I liked the sorrow she expressed in her poems, so I enjoyed reading it.)
TOTAL: 98/100
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Rank: 2nd
marks of 'scribbles' by swachchatoya983
Judged By: Faerie_Queene
Cover - 14/15
(It would have been better if some of the situations portrayed in your poetry were portrayed on the cover too. Like a girl silhouette in front of nature, as nature dominates the most in the book.)
Title & Blurb - 14.5/15
(I like the dreamy vibes from your blurb, and the title is also okay, but I just felt that something could be added with 'scribbles' to make it link better to your poems. Such as 'scribbles of wonder' or something.)
Flow - 10/10
(wonderful flow, that takes our mind into deep thoughts.)
Style/Plot - 19.5/20
(If the dreamy style could change midway, it would be better. To add variation.)
Language - 9.5/10
(The words used are wonderful, but punctuation looks confusing in some places.)
Anticipation - 4.5/5
(The same style does not always appeal to me, so sometimes I was not excited about turning the page.)
Enjoyment - 25/25
(despite all these, I loved the topics and language used, so I enjoyed it.)
TOTAL - 97/100
Rank: 3rd
My Poetry by Afrin_bk
Judged By: AvaBlake1
Cover - 15/15
[A remarkable cover, something that I have never come across on Wattpad. It was unique and the fonts were clear.]
Title and Blurb - 13/15
[Your title is vague, it just states "My Poetry". A suggestion will be to make the title more interesting or a word that will attract more readers. The blurb was well written but it wasn't written in a way to attract many readers. A little bit of touch will make it perfect.]
Flow - 9/10
[The flow of the poems at the ending was great but at the beginning, it didn't seem to be following any pattern from my perspective.]
Style/Plot - 20/20
[You have a unique style and each of your poems had a different meaning to it. I have to commend the last poem especially.]
Language - 8/10
[A few words are used wrongly and there are a few grammatical errors. Not many but you can correct them and it will be perfect.]
Anticipation - 4/5
[Your poems all held an interesting concept and I was interested to continue reading all along the way.]
Enjoyment- 24/25
TOTAL: 93/100
Overall, I think this was an amazing piece of work and you should keep up this great effort of yours!
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paracosm - my delusional nightmares by paracosmic_being
Judged By: AvaBlake1
Cover - 15/15
[The cover was very unique and I loved it.]
Title and Blurb - 15/15
[The title was one in a billion and the blurb gives a perfect description of what was written in the story.]
Flow - 8/10
[The poems had a good flow but there were several points where you messed up the flow or had loads of information which interrupted the flow of the poetry.]
Style/Plot - 18/20
[I adored your style because it was quite unique.]
Language - 8/10
[A few grammatical errors such as punctuation and incorrect usage of grammar but moderately okay.]
Anticipation - 4/5
[I wasn't very curious about reading each chapter but it did interest me to a certain extent but not to the extent that I was extremely excited.]
Enjoyment - 24/25
[I truly enjoyed the majority of the poems and I admired how you explained what it meant to you in your author's note. You have also done a great job in giving a great meaning to your poetry making the effect of being deep perfectly. Great job writer!]
TOTAL: 92/100
An amazing book and remarkable piece!
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Her Feelings by @priscellapeito
Judged By: AvaBlake1
Cover - 10/15
[The colours in the cover do not contrast and the font doesn't suit the cover at all.]
Title & Blurb - 12/15
[The blurb can be slightly written in a more poetic way to make it more effective. The title was surface based, I think with a more captivating title this book can go further.]
Flow - 10/10
[The rhyming was just perfect and you had a consistent flow in your poems.]
Style/Plot - 19/20
[Your style was fairly okay.]
Language - 9/10
[A few errors but otherwise it is good.]
Anticipation - 5/5
[It kept me hooked all throughout maybe because of how deep it was.]
Enjoyment - 24/25
[I enjoy reading about the feelings of people so this is why I truly enjoyed the book but at times it got kind of confusing.]
TOTAL: 89/100
With a few corrections, this book will make a fascinating book. Great work!
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Until I Stop Writing by its_JuiShah
Judged By: AvaBlake1
Cover - 12/15
[Your cover is okay but it is quite unattractive and the fonts aren't pretty and suited to the background.]
Title & Blurb - 11/15
[Your title does not relate to the poetry so I suggest you change the title to something that relates to it. Your blurb needs some editing because it just states what you write about but doesn't give a more in-depth description in a flow of poetry.]
Flow - 10/10
[I love the flow of your poems. The rhyming was far from remarkable.]
Style/Plot - 20/20
[Your style was very consistent.]
Language - 9/10
[Just a few grammatical errors.]
Anticipation - 5/5
[I was extremely intrigued to continue reading every poem stated because it really creates an effect in the reader's mind.]
Enjoyment - 25/25
I love your poems and admire every single one of them. I can state that you have a remarkable way of rhyming words and I think you did a great job in making this amazing compilation of poetry.
TOTAL: 92/100 marks
Overall, I can tell you that you can rhyme words so perfectly that it makes me jealous of this talent of yours. You are a writer that deserves more recognition for this amazing work of yours and I think that if you just place a more attractive cover and give it a better title, this book will go very far! I love your work a lot. Keep it up!
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'Unspoken Languages' by HafsaNaseem
Judged By: Faerie_Queene
Cover - 12/15
(There wasn't a face in the cover which made it less riveting. The emotions in your poetry could be portrayed in her face, if it could be seen. Else, it will be difficult to get what the book is about from the cover. Placement of title can be centered and the white backdrop is unnecessary!)
Title & Blurb - 10/15
(The title is okay, but it would be better if it was something like "Unspoken Words" as languages can't be unspoken, nah? Your "words" can only be unspoken. The blurb is too short.)
Flow - 10/10
(Wonderful flow, good rhyming.)
Style/Plot - 19.5/20
(The same style throughout the book is sometimes boring, and sometimes no rhyming makes it hard to read. Poems are not all about rhyming words, but sometimes the effort to make words rhyme ruins the flow of the poetry.)
Language - 10/10
(Just right. The words you used sound wonderful, and I am envious of your vocabulary.)
Anticipation - 4.5/5
(The same style does not always appeal to me, so sometimes I was not excited about turning the page. It was also hard to understand/relate to your poems sometimes.)
Enjoyment - 24.5/25
(Despite all these, I loved the topics and language used, so I enjoyed it.)
TOTAL: 90.5/100
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'Soulful poetry' by @self-love123
Judged By: Faerie_Queene
Cover - 10/15
(I suggest adding the title of the book on the cover. And as the poetry is mostly about food, you should give a link/keep some resemblance between the cover and your poems.)
Title & Blurb - 12/15
(The title sounds okay, but it does not give any hints about the types of poems in the book. I really recommend making a link to "food" or the notion of it. The blurb is clear but it is too short, and there is a spelling mistake.)
Flow - 9/10
(wonderful flow, and funny too.)
Style/Plot - 19/20
(The poems are awesome, I was laughing so much and thinking about the foods!)
Language - 10/10
(just right, with correct punctuation, and wonderful words.)
Anticipation - 5/5
Enjoyment - 25/25
(I could relate to the love towards the foods!)
TOTAL: 90/100
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'Love Wings a Collection Of Romantic Poetry And Love' by PriscillaYiadom4
Judged By: Faerie_Queene
Cover - 13/15
(I recommend utilizing the full space of the book for your title and subtitle. Otherwise, it is a beautiful cover.)
Title & Blurb - 13/15
(The title is okay, but very long. And the blurb is clear.)
Flow - 8/10
(wonderful flow, good rhythm, makes it easy to read.)
Style/Plot - 19/20
(Usage of the same words in every line creates a unique style, love it. However, the flow of the poems can be improved as it seems there isn't any link from one stanza to the next.)
Language - 8/10
(More varied words can be used!)
Anticipation - 4/5
Enjoyment - 23/25
(Most of your poems contain a childlike innocence and I enjoyed reading them.)
TOTAL: 88/100
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