Results for Historical Fiction
All raw scores and comments are in this chapter for Historical Fiction genre. A later chapter will be posted dedicated to all winners and details of how to claim the prizes, so stay tuned! If you spot any calculation mistakes, please feel free to PM us or comment beside the error. Thank you for joining us and all of you were all wonderful writers ♥️
Rank: 1st
A dead man's Tale by Queen_of_life_Heba
Judge By: _mytrueself_33
Cover: 9/10
Title and blurb: 8.5/10
Plot: 28.5/10
Flow: 9/10
Character development: 8.5/10
Anticipation: 9/10
Enjoyment: 10/10
Language: 5/5
TOTAL: 92.5/100
The story started with great anticipation and I just couldn't stop myself from reading it. All the points mentioned above were perfectly followed by the Author and I felt this book has to be in my private library
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Rank: 2nd
Karn's Realization by _Historywriter_
Judge By: m2ition
Cover - 5/10
[too busy and made font hard to read]
Title/Blurb - 9/10
[fit storyline perfectly]
Plot - 28/30
[The main character was written with emotion. I felt personally invested.]
Flow - 8/10
[Some areas were repetitive in description but not enough to stop the overall plot.]
Character Development - 15/15
[the character's turmoil was described before appearance, it made you more invested in the narrative.]
Anticipation - 9/10
[the character struggled at every turn, it made you hope for a better outcome]
Enjoyment - 10/10
[I loved feeling the character. Not just reading a narration.]
Language - 3/5
[overuse of dialogue tags (said) made some areas flat.]
TOTAL: 87/100
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Rank: 3rd
The Usurper's Queen by shazzarra
Judge By: m2ition
Cover - 7/10
[Font hard to read ]
Title/Blurb - 10/10
[exactly what the storyline is.]
Plot - 29/30
[Quickly introduced with strong character/ I liked how clever the smaller details were woven in. Anne's looks etc. They leaned to the plot, not just for visualization. ]
Flow - 6/10
[the indent errors made it hard to read smoothly but the plotline was still there.]
Character Development - 15/15
[The protagonist was introduced strongly with other characters having enough description to explain WHY the character felt as she did.]
Anticipation - 7/10
[it read a little slow due to the indents]
Enjoyment - 9/10
[this was a great period piece book with an original twist.]
Language - 3/ 5
[The indents being inconsistent left my eye searching for the next paragraph instead of naturally finding it with the flow.]
TOTAL: 86/100
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The Silver Bloom by BhumikaBV
Judge By: m2ition
Cover - 9/10
[Gorgeous graphics]
Title & Blurb - 9/10
[created curiosity / -1 for length]
Plot - 25/30
[wildly creative / little character description]
Flow - 7/10
[no dialogue breaks, overuse of pronouns (she/he) paragraph format too long]
Character Development - 13/15
[I understood them but could not visualize them.]
Anticipation - 7/10
[fell flat in small sections of each chapter]
Enjoyment - 8/10
[creative story line]
Language - 3/5
[dialogue breaks/pronouns/paragraph lengths]
TOTAL: 81/100
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Leeward by empiresofwater
Judge By: _mytrueself_33
Cover: 5/10
Title and blurb: 8/10
Plot: 27/30
Flow: 8/10
Character Development: 12/15
Anticipation: 9/10
Enjoyment: 9/10
Language: 5/5
TOTAL: 83/100
I really enjoyed the story and felt that the flow was smooth with no hast. There were really no errors with grammar and punctuation. I liked that the title and blurb were connected with the story. However, the cover could have been better than it is. And I hope that the author would choose to change it.
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Rajputi Kangan by dubeysnigdha17
Judge By: m2ition
Cover - 9/10
[gorgeous cover / only docked a point because the font is clearer]
Title & Blurb - 5/10
[the entire plotline was given away.]
Plot - 29/30
[her challenges were unique, not just a typical woman fighting for respect. The tension between the characters was fun and it lent to building the plot correctly.]
Flow - 6/10
[very little dialogue tags. I had to go back and reread sections to see who was speaking]
Character Development - 15/15
[personality was introduced first. It helps establish a connection before you understand their looks if they aren't already listed.]
Anticipation - 10/10
[every action she made pushed the story forwards and it kept the tempo fast like an action novel.]
Enjoyment - 8/10
[without the dialogue issues, I would have put this as a 10. Excellent concept]
Language - 2/5
[the dialogue ruined the flow. You didn't know who was saying what in 90% of the chapters]
TOTAL: 84/100
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Lakshman Priya Urmila by Vadehi9
Judge By: m2ition
Cover - 4/10
[color of the font got lost in the vivid colors of the graphic]
Title/Blurb - 10/10
[the author is writing about an overlooked historical figure. That's original in itself.]
Plot - 27/30
[I enjoyed the budding romance. The characters' behaviors danced in your mind.]
Flow - 5/10
[it was too fast. The story line jumped from scene to scene]
Character Development - 15/15
[the historical narration gave an in-depth background depth that the personalities added in as fiction built on.]
Anticipation - 9/10
[I was invested in their love story by the way their interactions were described]
Enjoyment - 7/10
[the plotline simply read too quickly, otherwise I found the story to be charming]
Language - 3/5
[incorrect tenses and commas before dialogue tags caused some choppy reading on top of the flow.]
TOTAL: 80/100
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Surya Putra Karna by Siya_Stark3000
Judge By: _mytrueself_33
Cover: 8.5/10
Title and blurb: 7/10
Plot: 24/30
Flow: 9/10
Character development: 9.5/10
Anticipation: 8/10
Enjoyment: 9/10
Language: 3/5
TOTAL: 78/100
I felt that the cover was aesthetically pleasing with perfect colour combo. Plot was great with a great twist from the original storyline. However a few details must be added to it. Character development was all over the story with matching flow. There were errors with grammar and punctuation.
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After Dyut: emotions and confessions by Dharmaatmika
Judge By: _mytrueself_33
Cover: 6/10
Title and blurb: 7.5/10
Plot: 21/30 Flow: 8.5/10
Character development: 9/10
Anticipation: 6.5/10
Enjoyment: 7/10
Language: 2.5/5
TOTAL: 68/100
Over the story was great but I felt there could be some development mad at cover and plot. There were a few spelling errors and many grammatical mistakes. Character development and flow was pretty good. As for title and blurb it could be improved a bit.
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A Maiden's Heart by @MLTaylor28
Judge By: _mytrueself_33
Cover: 7.5/10
Title and blurb: 7/10
Plot: 25/30
Flow: 8/10
Character development: 10.5/15
Anticipation: 9.5/10
Enjoyment: 10/10
Language: 2.5/5
TOTAL: 80/100
I felt that story was rather long and descriptive with a great original plot but the cover could have been better. I felt the title was perfect but maybe the blurb was a bit long or rather much giving.
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