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Rank 1st

The Green Guardian by CroodsGirl
Judged by: kaywa52

Cover - 10/10
Amazing cover! It's eye-catching, relevant to your story, and very clean! It's easy to read the title, and one-of-a-kind!

Title and Blurb - 10/10
Excellent! Not only do the blurb, title, and cover correlate with each other, but they are all incaptivating! Your blurb is simply fantastic and really holds it all together!

Plot - 29/30
The plot is like no other. Not only was it intriguing and mysterious, but it is clearly well-thought out and a central part to this story.  I've found absolutely no plot holes and the scenes are absolutely flawless! The one point missing is only for one moment when the scenery didn't make sense to me and I was confused, but it is still the best plot I've seen!

Flow - 10/10
Amazing! One of my only thoughts while reading this was how similar the flow was to a movie! We, the readers, got to see every perspective but there weren't so many sequences involved that made the book annoying. Well done!

Character Development - 15/15
Another job well done! Your characters are so real and integral to your story! It was so easy to picture them in my head, and nothing they said or did sounded out of place or too over-the-top!

Anticipation - 10/10
Your story simply hooked me from the beginning. Everything about it is so mysterious yet interesting to a point where I just have to continue reading to learn more about this world you have created. And, the cliffhangers at the end of each chapter just made it impossible for me to not go on.

Enjoyment - 10/10
Is this even a question? I love everything about this story! It was easy to fall into, and now I've found myself addicted to reading more.

Language - 5/5
I have seen absolutely no typos or grammar issues! I don't know how you did it, but I'm impressed.

TOTAL: 99/100

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Rank 2nd

Heart Wreck by fly2live
Judged by: kaywa52

Cover - 9/10
[I love the cover! However, it feels out of place with the title. The cover itself is beautiful and very original though!]

Title and Blurb: 6/10
[The title doesn't seem to fit the story. You have stars, and seas, and love mentioned in the blurb, but only one of those can be picked up from the title. The blurb isn't bad, but it also isn't enticing. It's also a bit confusing here and there.]

Plot - 30/30
[The plot is simply extraordinary! It wasn't at all what I expected. I am thoroughly engaged and satisfied. You've done a great job in creating this wonderful world of the sea and merging it with that of the world of mankind.]

Flow - 10/10
[The flow was a little slow at the beginning since I didn't know what was going to happen yet. But, the twist changed it all. I was so shocked that I didn't even see it coming! The events were undoubtedly unique and the twist was incredible.]

Character Development - 15/15
[I could really feel your characters. The way you described their emotions, how they saw life, and what they longed for...the comparisons and contrasts... You have exceptional talent with your characters and the way they feel and interact with the world. Absolutely brilliant.]

Anticipation - 8/10
[It wasn't much at first, but after the unexpected twist, I was captured. Never have I ever clicked so fast to get to the next chapter, as everything had changed in a moment.]

Enjoyment - 10/10
[I love your writing. The way you told your story really made me think about the world in a new perspective. It was eye-opening and mind-boggling. I was awed by how so many things can come together into a full circle. Excellent job.]

Language - 4/5
[Your language is beautiful! The only problem was with punctuation when it came to dialogue and the occasional unnecessary comma. There was also one time when a word didn't fit quite well. Other than that, everything was good!]

TOTAL: 92/100

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Rank 3rd
The Throne of the Four Realms by sharmee_m
Judged by: kaywa52

Cover - 10/10
Absolutely beautiful! I love how there are four sections of your cover, corresponding well with the "Four Realms" you mention in your title! The font is easy to read as well!

Title and Blurb - 10/10
Excellent! The title is clearly relevant, and you go over all necessary points in your blurb! Everything invites me into this magical world you've created!

Plot - 28/30
The plot is simply amazing! It was so hard to stop myself from reading so I can continue writing! The only problem I had was visualizing something's due to too much information. Sometimes it's easier to go with a simpler approach, but you still did very well!

Flow - 8/10
The pace was perfect! And, while I love the events that happened, they weren't all that original, which is the reason for the two minus points. However, considering how different the entirety of the story is from others, you still did good!

Character Development - 14/15
I love the characters! They were very realistic, and the emotions were very well portrayed. The one minus point is simply for the fact that some characters you failed to give a description for! Still, excellent!

Anticipation - 9/10
I was getting a little confused which is the only reason for the minus point, but, overall, I was really excited to see what happened next!

Enjoyment - 7/10
I really enjoyed this story, but it was sort of confusing with all the info-dumping. Some things are just best left without an entire paragraph explaining the complexities of the kingdoms. I would still be eager to continue reading, however!

Language - 3/5
There were a few mistakes involving the wrong word or repetition that made your story a little more confusing. Other than that, your descriptions were simply magnificent!

TOTAL: 89/100

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Argent | Child of Storm and Arrow by ShyGuySamurai

Judged by: kaywa52

Cover - 10/10
[Amazing cover! It's so beautiful and pleasing to the eye!]

Title and Blurb - 9/10
[I was hooked within the first sentence of the blurb. It is incredibly well written, and it's not too short or too long. It tells me exactly what I need to know before I start reading. The title is unique, but, because Argent is not the sole main character, I think it's a little out of place.]

Plot - 24/30
[The plot moves in a nice, steady stream. Moving through chapters is a breeze, but nothing is really pulling me along yet. Furthermore, my only complaint is that there isn't too much imagery. Is the small town they're walking in bustling or practically vacant? Is it rundown or pristine?]

Flow - 8/10
[I don't think the past was too fast, but I think you are skipping certain parts that are critical to have. For instance, we barely spend much time with just Argent and Darin as they get used to each other's company. Instead, we get introduced to new characters fairly quickly.]

Character Development - 10/15
[I feel like the only thing you lack here is imagery and emotions. I still don't know what some of the characters look like, and I'm already a few chapters in. As for emotions, I simply don't think you express them much. Surely Argent would be more distant having suffered what he did, right? Other than that, I really adore your characters, especially Iver!]

Anticipation - 7/10
[Just as I mentioned before, my interest is average at the moment, as nothing yet pushed me to find out what happens next. But, I was still curious enough to keep going!]

Enjoyment - 8/10
[Your story is amazing! My favorite part is the humor embedded in it. It was easy to fall in step with, and there were only a few confusing parts! It hasn't left a memorable impression on me yet, however. Regardless, you've done really well!]

Language - 4/5
[This segment is great, save for the few punctuation mishaps regarding dialogue, which is something many writers struggle with. You've used great vocabulary and I haven't even found any typos yet! Great job!]

TOTAL: 80/100

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The Sun Guardian by sipstherooibostea
Judged by: kaywa52

Cover - 10/10
I really like the cover! I love how the reflection of the gold metal really gives off "sun" vibes, and the simplicity makes it all more interesting and alluring. Great job!

Title and Blurb - 10/10
Amazing job for both! The blurb is interesting, it's just the right length, and tells me just enough for me to feel excited to start reading!

Plot -  26/30
The plot is simply astonishing. It's so unique that I just yearn to know more about this new world and find out what happens next. There isn't a lot of description when it comes to surroundings and there is almost too much detail when it comes to explaining certain things. A lot of info-dumping.

Flow - 5/10
The pace wasn't fast or slow, but it was disorganised. The point of views changed constantly in a way that was confusing. The events were well written, though it wasn't something new I've come across. The twist was unexpected, but the presentation of the twist was awkward.

Character Development: 14/15
I love the characters! They are relatable and they aren't perfect, just like people in the real world. I can imagine most of them perfectly!

Anticipation -  8/10
I honestly am drawn to this book! I can't wait to see what comes next for the characters.

Enjoyment -  7/10
I love the book, but there were a few things that put off the experience. The info-dumping, for one, then the constant repetitions and switches in point of view. Other than that, I really want to get to know this book more.

Language: 2/5
There were quite a good amount of run-on sentences and misused punctuation. It was also very repetitive and the use of vocabulary wasn't varied. Also, there were instances when the point of view changed to words like "us" or "we" when it's supposed to be in third person.

TOTAL: 82/100

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Throne of Dragonix by Baqkns

Judged By: Nightingale257

Cover:  10/10
[I really like this cover! It has dark and light colors that contrast very well and fits the story's theme.]

Title & Blurb: 7/10
[The title is excellent, just the right length and goes well with the cover. The blurb could summarize the events happening in Dragonix to focus on introducing the protagonist, otherwise it's well-written.]

Plot:  26/30
[The world of Dragonix is absolutely fascinating! A lot of the settings are described vividly, and the main plot is very intriguing, but I feel some of the worldbuilding could be interwoven more with the plot, rather than relegating certain elements of it to a separate section that isn't part of the story. ]

Flow: 6/10
[The story progresses at a reasonable pace, for the most part. Having the characters' entire backstories explained in the middle of scenes early on slowed the pacing considerably.

Character Development: 14/15
[The character's motivations are made very clear and are all the more real and relatable as a result. Ignia's rage, Iian's concerns, Dragneel's sheer confidence and cleverness, they all make the cast unique!]

Anticipation:  7/10

Enjoyment: 7/10
[While the beginning with Ignia and Iian was rather rocky, the tale of Dragneel Bloom captured me. I really feel she is one of the highlights of the story, alongside the world itself.]

Language: 3/5
[The paragraphs are spaced appropriately, but some of the phrasing and dialogue were awkward to read. I'd also advise checking punctuation, as there were some commas and full stops that were misplaced.]

TOTAL: 80/100

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A Mystical Journey by Ashia777
Judged By: Nightingale257

Cover:  3/10
[The font & color used for the title don't contrast much against the rest of the cover, making it hard to read. The cover itself doesn't convey what the story is about.]

Title & Blurb: 5/10
[The title and blurb felt too vague to grasp what the story would be about.]

Plot: 10/30
[I failed to see where the fantasy elements and the conflicts were in the plot, as it started with a normal morning and school routine. Descriptions weren't particularly vivid or interesting, save for the dream sequences. I feel this story would benefit from shortening the "normal school day" chapters, as they heavily stagnate the plot, and explore how Trey's dreams affect him as he develops his illness.]

Flow:  4/10
[The first few chapters felt slow, as it dragged on some scenes. There were some hints at what was happening to Trey via his dreams, but it didn't feel connected to his actions in school.]

Character Development: 6/15
[Not many characters stood out to me nor seemed to have much personality. They had some aspects that could've made them interesting if they were explored more, such as Trey's dislike of girls or how his mother's secretive nature affects their relationship.]

Anticipation: 2/10

Enjoyment: 3/10
[I can't say that I enjoyed the story very much, even when the main conflict started rearing its head. The beginning didn't draw enough interest nor helped me get immersed in its plot and characters.]

Language: 1/5
[Some paragraphs and dialogue were oddly spaced, and there was misplaced, misused, and missing punctuation throughout. Some verbs were in the wrong tense, such as "Did I fell asleep?" for example, and the phrasing was awkward to read at times.]

TOTAL: 34/100

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The Last Guardian | Darkling Academy by alana_kate
Judged By: Nightingale257

Cover:  8/10
[The cover fits the story and its theme, but I'd recommend making sure the font and the girl contrast well enough with the dark background, so they're more visible. Aside from that, I like it!]

Title & Blurb: 10/10
[The title and blurb go well together and give a very good idea of what the story is about, while also drawing interest.]

Plot:  27/30
[The mystery surrounding Jacob's disappearance and the nature of Darkling Academy kept me interested in the story. Descriptions of the characters were very detailed, and so were their actions & body language during tense scenes. What little I saw of Darkling Academy sounded very intriguing, as was the mystery behind the prologue's events.]

Flow:  9/10
[The events unfold at a good pace, and there are enough hints to guess at what might happen without giving away any twists.]

Character Development: 11/15
[I liked the characterization of the protagonist and her friend, but I felt said friend didn't feel as memorable. The protagonist's flaws are shown in subtle ways that make her more "real" in a sense.]

Anticipation: 8/10

Enjoyment:  7/10
[I do wish I could see more of Darkling Academy, otherwise this is an enjoyable read.]

Language: 4/5
[There were some misspelled or misused words throughout, such as an instance of using "fill" instead of "feel".]

TOTAL: 84/100

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The Midst by islandapricots
Judged By: Nightingale257

Cover: 10/10
Such a beautiful cover! It really conveys this "mystical" feeling to me.

Title & Blurb: 9/10
The blurb is short and to the point, and it tells enough about the protagonists and what the main conflict will be.

Plot: 27/30
The descriptions of the environment and Koldan's magic are fascinating, it creates this "mystique" around what he and the Unknown are. Orisa and Koldan's pasts and their relation to their current quest are shown well, it even helps to sympathize with them. Overall, it's a well-crafted plot.

Flow: 6/10
Some of the plot twists felt as though they happened very fast, at times making it hard to understand what was happening.

Character Development: 11/15
The chemistry between Orisa and Koldan feels very natural, like two friends who have known each other for a long time. Both have their hidden depths, which adds another layer to them that makes them relatable and "real" in a way. There were times where their mood shifted very quickly, which was understandable during certain stressful scenes, but at times it felt contrary to their established personality.

Anticipation: 7/10

Enjoyment: 7/10
The beginning was fantastic, filled with mystery as to what was happening, but the pace made it a little challenging to understand.

Language: 3/5
The verb tense is very inconsistent, and sometimes made sentences awkward to read. For example: "Orisa stumbling back, caught herself against the rocky cave walls." There were also some misplaced commas.

TOTAL: 80/100

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