Title: Just Survive

Author: nicolettem64

Reviewer: lee-louw

Summary: 5/5

Your summary sparked a lot of interest in me. On point detail. Great character and conflict introduction. I wouldn't suggest you change anything!

Grammar: 5/5

You edited well. No grammar mistakes, no spelling mistakes. Nothing.

Character building: 5/5

I don't know what to say. All your characters left a great impression; the two main one's as well as your extras.

Writing style: 5/5

Easy to read and understand all that's happening.

Plot uniqueness: 4/5

I love the whole concept of moving on and though it isn't the main point in the story, I also love how your two main characters are still humane even in a world where it's 'one man for himself.' I can only hope they don't lose that side of themselves in the midst of the chaos. The way their stories are different but intertwine is something that I adore.

OVERALL SCORE: 24/25

If your book was a movie, I probably would've cried 10 seconds in. It's a good thing you did some editing because I really think it'd be great if you entered your book into some competitions! A job well done!