Title: The Day I Die

Author: NoNameIsWorkin

Reviewer: FawnIAtlas

Cover: 4/5

The cover is superb, it really gave me mysterious yet depressed thoughts vibes. It looks like a cover you'd find on a new-adult book if I'm being honest. I love the photograph you've used and the text all seems well placed.

The top part of text could maybe be the same cursive as the title? As it would look more seamless. Other than that I have no complaints!

Summary: 4/5

Honestly the whole layout is a little repetitive. Working your way with the same number lines in every paragraph rids the summary of visual diversity that can be really gripping when a reader scans.

So maybe try to lengthen some parts of the summary just to have some contrast. Also with the last line 'And he can't do it without her help.' Would work better as a single sentence instead of in a paragraph to give more dramatic effect.

Writing Style: 3/5

I love how your style of writing really compliments Sophie and her way of thinking. The language is emotive and really gripping, also had me agreeing as most points.

But there are some points I have to make.

When writing Sophie's or an characters thoughts, using no mark lines seems unpolished so instead of - bring it on. Sophie thought.

Writing with ' ' marks seems better, here - 'bring it on,' Sophie thought. As well as keeping the internal dialogue in the same sentence to make it seamless.

Characterisation: 5/5

Sophie is the best!

She is so... real. I adore how she doesn't change throughout the movie in terms of who she is and her morals. She is a stubborn woman and I love it, taking no shit from Levi. I like how their relationship develops as well and you can rally tell a difference from how they communicate and interact with each other so good job!

Imagination + Creativity: 5/5

I've never thought of a concept like this before which I love because reading the same old same old can get boring. Tropes are something no one can escape but the story isn't cliche at all and I really enjoyed reading it.

OVERALL SCORE: 21/25

I really enjoyed reading your novel, I actually got through the whole thing once I started haha, and was obsessed right away. With some minor tweaking the novel should be exactly like a published manuscript!