Title: A Second Chance 

Author: fatima3444

Reviewer: fantasy_panda2003

Summary: 5/5

Your summary was well written. I liked how you left the reader asking questions as that really pulls them in and makes them want to read your story to find out what will happen next. I have to say you did an amazing job with that!

Grammar: 3/5

You have some errors with missing words/misused words, past and present tense, punctuation, and and run-on sentences. I would suggest going back and fixing these errors to make the flow of your story better. We have some great editors at the Ruby's Editing Store who would be happy to help with that!

Character Building: 5/5

Your main character Everleigh has a very interesting personality as well as a pretty name. She seems very skeptical and uncertain at times, but she also knows how to be confident and stand up for herself. I also enjoyed the memories she recalled and the flashbacks you included in your story. They really add a nice touch into the storyline and helps explain why people end up treating Everleigh the way they do.

Writing Style: 3.75/5

The flow of your writing is a bit choppy at times and makes your story kind of hard to read. On the other hand, I enjoy how you convey all of your characters' thoughts and feelings. It really brings out their different personalities.

Plot + Uniqueness: 3/5

This story seems like a lot of romance stories I've read before, where the girl dates a bunch of guys and then rumors go around that she is a slut and she hopelessly tries to gain back her reputation. It's almost a little bit clichè. However, I still enjoyed your story as it was heartwarming and enjoyable to read.

OVERALL SCORE: 19.75/25

I'm sure that after you edit your story it will be even better, but I truly did enjoy the storyline and your character building!