Title: Stellar Lucifer

Author: awesomeSTG

Reviewer: Blue_Kiwi_777

Summary: 5/5

Wow! That was an epic entry into your story! Gosh, the end of the world?! That was wicked and scary and so intense. I loved it! It was captivating and it was to the point!

Grammar: 4/5

There weren't many grammatical errors. And, if there were, it could easily be overlooked. There were just a few spelling errors that needed brushing up. For example, you wrote: 

"And only when I finished eating, did dad, found the opportunity and speak up. 

Instead, you could've wrote: 

"And, only when I finished eating, did Dad find the opportunity to speak up. 

Other than that, it was good. 

Character Building: 5/5

I really felt sorry for Lucas! I mean, there's such a big bullying issue at the moment and I really feel like we need to see something being done about it and what better way than to project it in a work of fiction? I hate Brick! And I loved that part when Keina said, "And they called themselves the Imperial Guards". 

Writing Style: 5/5

I enjoyed reading your story. It was neat and precise. It wasn't messy, which makes reviewing it so much better. There was so much of conflict and intense description and disaster and it was just so realistic. Your writing style was good. I loved reading from different POVs! You made it good enough for me to want to read more! 

Plot Uniqueness: 5/5

End of the world?? I mean, I haven't read about that as yet. It was scary. I imagined myself in the situation and it was terrifying. It was so deadly! Keep it up!

OVERALL SCORE: 24/25

I'm so sorry for the late review. Anyways, I couldn't really complain! I enjoyed your writing! Keep it up! I can't wait to see more!