Let's continue..
Shivi were in their room, Raavi was pacing in the room angrily still thinking about Dhara's words.
Shiva was looking at her unbelievably..
Shiva: Ae maami ki behen ki beti bahar kya karke aayi hai tu?
Raavi: (sarcastically)Disco karke  aayi ho..
Shiva: Ae chipkali zyada ulta jawab dene ki zaroorat nahi hai Bhabhi se aise kaise baat kar sakti hai tu?
Raavi: Jaise unhone ki thi waise hi
Shiva: Raavi tu hosh mein hai? Tu kabse Rishita bhabhi ki tarha hogayi? Dekh Bhabhi ne bohot..
Raavi: Haa Shiva bohot kuch kiya hai unhone theek hai par teri insult karna ka hak kisne diya?
Shiva(lil with lil anger): Acha maami aur teri us dost ko kisne hak diya tha? Agar aaj bhabhi ke jaga Maami hoti unko bhi aise hi sunati? Raavi doesn't say anything.. Huh nahi karti pata hai.. yeh dhong tu sirf gharwalo ke saamna karti hai ki dekho main Shiva ki kitni care karti hu
As Raavi was already angry his words added fume to it.
Raavi(pulling him by collar): Bas Shiva tu har bar galat hi kyu sochta hai mere baare main? Maine bahar bhi kaha tha ab phir bolri hu jab baat mere paati ki hogi toh chahe saamne jo bhi ho main chup nahi hogi, koi bhi se mera matlab koi bhi hai, chahe woh Massi ho, Sneha ho ya Dhara di ho samjha. Kabse tujhe samjhana ki koshish kar rahi hu ki mein is rishte ko mauka dena chahti hu isliye nahi ki meri majburi hai isliye kyuki main yeh chahti hu
Shiva:(releasing his collar from her hand) Aur maine tujhe pehle bhi bola hai ki is rishte ko mujhe koi mauka nahi dena
Raavi: Toh tujhe karna kya hai? Na tujhe mera dost bana hai , na tujhe is rishte ko mauka dena hai. Toh tu bol kya chahta hai tu?
Shiva: ki tu is zabardasti ke rishte ko nibhaye
Raavi :Kya bolra hai tu? Shiva koi bhi rishta zabardasti ya majburi se nahi chalta, ek rishte na pyaar , vishwas , dosti aur respect se chalta hai
Shiva: Aur humare rishte main inme se kuch bhi nahi hai. Na respect, na vishwas , na dosti (turns other side) aur na hi (takes a pause) pyaar.
Raavi(turns him back) Haa main manti hu ki humare rishte main abhi pyaar aur dosti nahi hai par vishwas aur respect dono hai .. (Shiva looks at her) Shiva hum dono hi ek dusre pe bohot vishwas karte hai aur mujhe yeh bhi pata hai ki tu meri aur is rishte ki respect karta hai bas aapni Chattan Pandya wali image maintain karne ke liye dikhata nahi hai..
Shiva: ye.. yeh filmy dialogue marne ki zaroorat nahi hai.. bahar kya bolri thi tu bhabhi ko ki unhone kabhi main kya feel karta hu nahi pucha toh tune kounsa puchliya?
Raavi: Kitni baar toh puch chuki hu par har baar bhag jaata hai, toh aaj bolde kya chahta hai tu? Bol sun rahi hu main.
Shiva(with heavy) main yeh chahta hu ki tu mujhe chode aur ch chali jaa ham( cracking voice)hamesha ke liye (& closes his eyes & a single tear rolled down his cheek)
Raavi was astonished, his words
Shook her.
Raavi pulls him closer (shouts with welled up eyes) Kya bolra hai tu? Pagal hogaya hai kya? Main nahi jaari kahi samjha..
She continues with a chocked voice.. pata hai Shiva jab papa the na toh mujhe hamesha pyaar se Gudiya bolte the par Pandya family ne toh mujhe sach ki Gudiya samjhliya har koi meri emotions ke saath khelta hai jab maan bharjata hai toh ek kone main phek dete hai jaise koi purana samaan ho, ek bhai mandap pe chodeta hai dusre bhai se meri shaadi hoti hai jo mujhse nafrat karta, phir woh bhi chodne ki baat karta hai, har time hurt karta hai,Shiva mera dil toota hai iska matlab yeh nahi hai ki mujhe kuch mehsoos nahi hota, jhoot bolte hai log ki toote hue dil ko kuch mehsoos nahi hota, hota hai sabse zyada hota hai har cheez khanjar ki tarha chubti hai. Shiva kya main itni buri hu ki har koi mujhe chod deta hai? Pehle maa- papa phir Dev aur ab tu..She cries hyperventilately causing her to breath heavily & falls down on the floor..
Shiva( bends down & sits infront of her) Raavi ro mat please
Raavi: (still crying)Shi... Shiva please baata na kya problem hai? Koi kaami hai mujhme? Bol na.. kyu hai koi mujhe chod deta hai.. tu bolna ma.. main khudko change karne ki puri koshish karungi & wipes her unstoppable tears... Please baata na.. ma main  jo bhi tu bolega na woh karungi but please mujhe khudse dur mat kar bohot dard hota hai mujhe.. kyu hota hai pata nahi par hota hai, Shiva bachpan se lekar aajtak main sirf tere saath aapna dard share karti aayi hu aur hamesha sirf tere saath hi karna chahati hu.. please mat chod mujhe
Shiva: (wiping her tears)Raavi tu buri nahi hai, tu bohot achi hai
Raavi: Phir kyu chodraha hai ?
Shiva: Kyuki problem tujhme nahi mujhme hai.. main tere layak nahi hu...
Raavi: Aur tujhse yeh bekwaas kisne kahi hai.
Shiva(stands up) Sab bolte hai
Raavi: (She too stands up)Koun sab? Maami? Sneha? Rishta humdono ka hai kisi teesre ko kyu importance dera hai tu?
Shiva: Raavi chahe kuch bhi ho par sach nahi badlta kaha tu aur kaha main koi match nahi hai. Tu itni padhi likhi aur main gawar tu Somanath ki sabse sundar ladki aur mein jungli aur waise bhi tu toh hamesha prince charming chahti thi na par dekh tujhe koun milgaya. Tu puchti haina ki main usdin kyu pk aaya kyuki tere dost ki baat yaha (points at his heart) khanjar ki tarha chubi hai.. pata nahi Shivji ne humare beech itna farak kyu kiya? Kyu har koi bolta hai ki mujhse Shaadi karke teri life kharab hogayi? Kya hum ek nahi ho sakte? ( He breaks down)
Raavi always knew he hid alot of emotions inside him but she never thought he was so vulnerable from inside
Raavi: Shiva kisne bola ki humare bich fasle hai? Hum ek hai, Shivji ne hume ek dusre ke liye chuna hai, Shiva koi bhi perfect nahi hota, perfect couple 2 perfect logo se nahi banta balki ek dusre ki achai aur burai accept karke saath main aage badne se banta hai.. humare shaadi jin halato main hui hai woh sahi nahi the par hum milkar aage ki zindagi sahi kar sakte ek dusre ko aapna kar. Aur raha sawal prince charming ka toh Shiva ab main fairy tale wale sapne se bahar aachuki hu aur samjh gayi hu ki koi prince charming nahi hota, aapka humsafar woh hota hai jo har mushkil pal main aapke saath de aur har khushi main aapke saath celebrate kare aur mere liye mera humsafar tu hai
Shiva: Raavi main?
Raavi: Nahi woh pados main Sharma ji haina unka beta
Shiva: Par unka beta toh bohot chota hai?
Raavi looks at him unbelievably
Raavi: Shiva main khush ki tune aaj aapni insecurities ke baare main mujhe bataya aur main teri help karna chahti hu inse ladne ke liye.. forwards her hand bol tu dega mere saath? Thamega yeh haath hamesha?
Shiva thinks for moment but Raavi thinks he doesn't want to let her help him & was about to take her hand back but stops
Shiva: O phoolkumari itne main hi haath dukhgaya umar bhar kaise sambhelegi? Raavi looks at him shockingly
Raavi: Matlab tu?
Shiva nods in yes & keeps his hand on her
Both smile at each other & their journey begins..
Screen freezes..
Phew!!
How was it?
I actually wanted to clear their misunderstandings so I wrote this
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Love,
Ur new writer 😊