Hey so I closing this for the time being. And for those who are still waiting, I am sorry. It may take a while. I didn't plan for my schedule being busy. Also I get depression, which causes lack of motivation. Just know I have NOT forgotten about you. I will do my best. It may take a month. Maybe shorter, maybe longer. Who knows. Just please be patient and don't hate me.

I may also not review your whole book if it's super long. (Like if it's 10hrs long).

Most importantly I want to say, don't give up on your writing. Every individual has their own style. Don't let my opinions discourage you from writing. I am just here to point out grammar and help with execution. In my opinion, we are all writers. Each of us has their own imaginations, creating different stories, worlds, and characters. It just comes down to execution. No idea is dumb. Be your own artist and write, write, write.