Ruby: this is a rewrite everyone. Just seeing if typing this way is easier to understand for some of the viewers. Okay here we go.

*It was a calm and active day. Pokémon trainer Camile was on her way catching her fourth Pokémon. She'd already caught a Squietle, Charmander, and a Eevee. She brought along her net and makeup kit. Her lips were a light pink. She carries her net as she walks through knee high grass, crunching under her feet. As she walk, her purse around her waist with her pokè balls jingle a little from her moments. She soon hears rustling in some bushes ahead. Camile gasp as she held her net above her head, her arms holding it steady and her grip firm.*

Camile: I got you now," she shout as Camile swing the net down to see it wasn't as she thought.

*It was a large hole in the ground and whooshing sound as the grass blow in the wind. Amaze by all the eerie and mystical void Camile lend in closer starstruck, but immediately snap out of it.*

Camile: Ahhh wh ..what is that," Camile exclaim as she took her purse off wondering if maybe her Pokémon seen anything like it.

*She sat her net down as she rumble through her purse when she saw the thing sucking in her net. Springing to action she caught her net dropping her purse as the pokè balls roll out. Struggling against pulling her net back she soon found herself being suck in as well. With a scream, the portal close and Camile adventure begun. She continue to scream at the top of her lunges as she falls through space, time and emptiness itself.

Seeing beauty and also terror. She felt nausea as she continues to fall with her net tightly in her clutch hand. Her makeup kit left behind with her purse. She looks around curiosity slowly taking hold as she sees wonder. Beautiful arrays of colors and seeing the void that holds everything to the like she never seen before. While in the mist of looking around Camile sees a another hole opening in front of her. There's green grass and tons of trees. And before long she was was flung though the portal with the net at her side groaning in pain from the impact. The portal closes right after as Camile lay in the middle of a beautiful green Forest; The sun shining brightly and the trees and leaves giving shade. Camile groans as she roll to her back clutching her stomach. Her eyes drooping heavy at first.*

Camile: Wh..where am I," she query.

*The forest beauty show as Camile spot a few strangely looking birds that were familiar. The red, black mask that cover it's face forming like a armor and narrowing as it has a sharp beak.*

Camile: This all looks so.. familiar," Camile spoke as she starts getting up grabbing her net; the cool wind blows by. The ground feels firm and flat underfoot. The scenery has hills going up and hills going down. The blue sky and puffy clouds roll right by. She needed one more thing to complete her conclusion of the world, and to do so she needed higher ground.

Looking for some sign she wasn't dreamy Camile continue to walk on foot pushing pass trees and bushes ahead. She then looked one tree over deeming it tall enough and with many branches easy to climb. Struggling with pulling herself up while nearly falling or being impale by branches as she continued on her way to the top. Once there she look around spotting the top of a building at some distances away. Feeling hopeful and excited at the chances that the building she saw could've been Beacon. Camile makes the conclusion she's in the Emerald Forest. She wanted to shout and cheer, but not wanting to attach grimm Camile works on getting down the tree in thought.*

Camile: "I'm in thee Emerald Forest. Ho...how did I get here? How is any of this possible? That hole... It brought me here! Something about port... Portland... Portal! I got sucked through a portal. It should be impossible, hm... Only one way to find out. If this is the Emerald Forest, then that building I saw is likely Beacon. There I will find Headmaster Ozpin. He should be able to help."

*So Camile begun to form a plan as she works on climbing down the tree. While in thought Camile grab a branch and losing her balance slip. Feeling her stomach drop as she gasp and desperately grasp for another branch. Barely catching one between her sweaty fingers and palms Camile thought to herself (You really need to pay attention next time you.) Seeing another branch nearby she let's go landing on the one below her as the branch creak due to her weight and she quickly jump grasping another and dropping into a roll not to take the full focus of the impact. Her hair ruffle and messy as leaves and twigs make a prefect nest for small critters. Now knowing her direction Camile starts to follow the sun in the direction of Beacon taking twigs and leaves out as she go. As she start her search for Beacon academy she thinks about what to say to the headmaster of the school Ozpin. Deep in thought Camile mind begun to wander as doubt slowly fill the space inside her head. Camile's thought

(Perhaps he could help me, but then again. How could he help me? A girl from a whole another world. He probably won't have a clue what I'm talking about, let alone to help me. I'll be lucky if he doesn't kick me out.)

*Camile signs deeply worried and concern. Without looking where she was going Camile walk right into a tree. Feeling like her nose could have been busted Camile groans in pain rubbing her tender nose.*

Camile: Oww oww oww," Camile exclaimed. That like super hurt. Hmm..."

*Camile step back noticing the tree making a little opening through the cracks in between the trees and could still see the school. Not sure if she has much of a choice in the matter whether to go to Ozpin or not, she continues on her way. Her courage steadily growing as she avoid Grimm feeling defenseless without a weapon. Soon after a long walk Camile arrives at Beacon tire and hungry. Finding it pointless to complain she heads inside hoping for the best. As Camile pushed her way through the crowded of students, she notice Ozpin and Glynn Goodwitch were leaving. Realizing the speech was over she pushes herself harder bumping into a blond hair teen who she recognize as Jaune and had shouted,

Camile: Excuse me," as she continue on her way.

*Finally making it into the hallways, she look around finding Ozpin and Goodwitch turn the corner and soon begun to chase after them.*

Camile: Professor Goodwitch, headmaster Ozpin," Camile shout. Wait, please!"

*Ozpin stops in his tracks to turn and face the girl as Goodwitcu look over to see her. Camile stood panting as she felt exhausted from the day.*

Ozpin: yes," Ozpin said as he place both hands on his cane looking to her. How may I assist you?"

Camile: i...i..," Camile continued to huff and heave before long stomach growl turning a light shade of pink.

*Camile panic and wave her hands widely trying to explain.*

Camile: ahhhh... This is not what you think!"

Ozpin: young Lady it's fine," Ozpin chuckles lightly turning to his assistant.

Ozpin: Miss Goodwitch if you would be so kind as to prepare a lunch while I see to the issue."

Goodwitch: yes of course Ozpin. Excuse me," Glynn turn and walk away with her assignment.

Ozpin: come let's talk in my office," Ozpin smile kindly as Camile nods feeling speechless.

*Stepping in his office Camile felt as if she was in the cave of wonders. As she look around Camile let her hand skim across the brown wooded wall as she was amaze not only was it as awesome as watching the show, but even more amazing when you can feel everything the characters could feel and touch. Ozpin chuckles watching her as he takes a seat behind his desk then tap his cane on the ground to get her attention as he gesture for her to sit. As Camile sit there her graze wandering when Ozpin clear his throat interlocking his fingers as his elbow form a triangle on the desk when Camile look to him.*

Ozpin: Now while Miss Glynn Goodwitch prepares your lunch, let's discuss why you call of mine assistants, yes" Ozpin quarry as Camile straighten her back.

*Face to face with the headmaster himself she often thought it was a dream. That some Pokémon cast Song, or hypnosis on her. She realize she wasn't speaking and just nods.*

Camile: I've came here in hopes you could help me," Camile state.

*By then Glynn Goodwitch had return with sandwiches on a tray. Walking by she sat the tray on the desk in front of Camile taking her side by Ozpin.*

Ozpin: thank you Miss Glynn," Ozpin smiles and raise his mug of coffee to her.

Glynn: You're welcome Ozpin," Glynn reply to him still looking to Camile.

Ozpin: Now this young Lady was just explaining the issue to me," Ozpin begun as he looks to her sitting back.

*Camile nods chewing on a sandwich.*

Camile: Yes see, I'm not from this world."

*Glynn and Ozpin both look intrigue as Camile continued to explain her story. Ozpin seem quite interest, though Glynn Goodwitch did not find it believable.*

Glynn: That is a intersing story young Lady," Glynn begun. "However where is your proof? How do we know this isn't just a tall tale of some sort?"

Camile: Here," Camile show them her net she use for catching small Pokemon's such as Butterfree, Venamoth, and magicarp, perhaps.

Glynn: I'm afraid that is not good enough," Glynn said sternly eyeing the net then the girl.

Camile: I don't have much on me," Camile start. "Most of my things were left behind."

Ozpin: I see," Ozpin takes a sip of his mug "Thank you."

Camile: You're welcome Ozpin sir," Camile reply. "So will you be able to help me?"

Ozpin: My dear, Creating portals is a difficult matter, and not only that, but it would require vast amount of energies not to mention someone to maintain that energy," Ozpin start.

*Camile signs hearing all this and started to feel like her stomach had drop. (Could I really be struck here) she thought to herself as Ozpin took a last sip of his coffee setting the mug down.*

Ozpin: However that does not mean I won't try," Ozpin finish as a wide smile spread on Camile perch lips.

Camile: Really," Camile question while Ozpin nods. "Thank you sooo Much! I'll help in anyway I can." "Very good," Ozpin smiles friendly. "Now since we'll be working on making the portal, why not stay awhile."

*as Ozpin suggested Goodwitch look over to him after doing some research on the girl for anything.*

Glynn: What," Glynn query. "Sir with all due respect there is nothing on this girl. It's like she's not register in data. And furthermore there's the matter of picking out a weapon for her against the grimm. There is too much to do and too little time to get it all done."

Ozpin: Then Miss Glynn I suppose we'll be quite busy then," Ozpin saids calmly. "She'll need uniforms, and of course she'll pick out her weapon in combat class. And also She'll be loaning school money till she is able to earn her own and purchases her necessaries."

Glynn: Very well Sir," Glynn nods wearily of Camile.

*It wasn't like she dislike the girl, she was just cautions since they had little evidence if what she told them was true. However seeing how Ozpin had faith she would do what she could to aid.*

Ozpin: now then," Ozpin reach out to shake Camile hand seeing she's still in shock. "Welcome to Beacon young Camile."

Pix: Alright this is a different way of writing the story and we hope you enjoy.

Ruby: phew and the rewrite for chapter one is complete! Also 2078 words!

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