Reviewed by: Avid-ReaderOrWriter

Book title: Zombie World

Author's name: CrownedLordSuperior

Blurb- I loved the blurb! Sometimes, authors make their blurb way too long or not long enough. They include information that is not needed, or too much information. Unlike them, you included just enough information about the plot as well as the character!

Rate-10/10

Cover- I enjoyed the cover though I'm not sure what the plane had to do with the plot. I liked the one man standing on the plane however, since he's obviously not the only one still alive, I'd change it around maybe. Perhaps you could do something with shadows, and silhouettes. Shadows and silhouettes go well together. However, it is entirely up to you. The font is also a good pick and well as the subtitle. Not too flashy, yet it catches the reader's attention

Rate- 9/10

Plot/Grammar- Right off the bat, I was pretty impressed. You start out your story with a quote which I love. The only problem I have with the quote is the formatting! You could format it in two different ways. Right now, you have "What lies behind you and What lies in front of you, Pales in comparison to What lies in front of you". Of course you can see the main problem with it is you capitalized the wrong letters. If you wanted to write it one line say;

"What lies behind you and what lies in front of you, pales in comparison to what lies in front of you" however, if you wanted to write it the way I think you were, you would just have to add indents and keep everything as is. You'd change it to;

"What lies behind you and

What lies in front of you,

Pales in comparison to

What lies in front of you"

The poem is the main thing I noticed. Other than that, your use of adjectives, verb tenses, and punctuation is top notch.

Rate- 9/10

Character Development- There isn't much room for character development since there were only two chapters, but I must say, you portray your characters' emotions quite well! The way you wrote Druv's words when he was mad at Bansee made me feel his pain. Very good job with your characters!

Rate- N/A

Overall- I enjoyed what you had so far! I'd just make the changes to your poem and maybe spice up the cover a little, however the tip about the cover is just a recommendation.

Final Rate- 90/100

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