Reviewed by: ChristineAcedon

Book Title: To Everyone But Us

Author's Name: neliewrites 

Cover: 10/10

Amazing cover. I love it so much!

Title: 10/10

The title seems to fit your work perfectly. It alludes to secrets, which fits perfectly with how the story is portrayed in the description.

Blurb/Description: 10/10

You hit every marker on this; introducing your characters, the conflict, the setting and the stakes. It's the perfect attention-grabbing description that will work to pull in potential readers and keep them there. After reading it, I immediately wanted to read more.

Creativity and originality: 10/10

The concept of a list is great and if I were back in high school, I would've strongly considered stealing their idea. Everything about this story screams originality.

Plot and Flow: 20/20

You've got a nice flow going throughout your story. The plot seems well fleshed out, it never feels as if we're missing anything, and there is never a dull moment.

Character Development: 20/20

It's really hard not to like Kristy. Rosie has a strong voice as she tells the story and usually I'm all about the main 'couple', but the friendship between Rosie, Kristy and Millie from the very start is amazing. Their personalities jump of the page and I loved the three of them immediately. As you introduce them and allow the readers to get to know each character, you do it without forcing it down our throats.

Writing style: 10/10

I really enjoy reading the story, hearing Rosie's voice in my head. It's written in a way that doesn't drag and holds your interest.

Grammar, spellings, etc.: 10/10

I didn't notice any grammar or spelling errors. It's clear you took your time with this story and your efforts shine through.

Overall: 100/100

Everything about your story is well done and holds the audience's attention. Your characters have strong personalities and don't come across as flat. It was truly a pleasure to read and I look forward to reading more.

Thank you for allowing me the opportunity to check out your work! I can't wait to see what you do in the future.