Reviewed by: Avid-ReaderOrWriter

Book title: The Pack's Founding

Author's name: zabitzz22

Cover- The cover is an exciting choice! I like the wolf's translucent face at the top. The silhouettes of the men on horses were a wonderful touch giving the impression that this is a historical fiction tale. The colors, the wolf, and the silhouettes are such a wonderful touch and they don't clash at all with the plot. The main problem I have though is the title font! The title itself is excellent, however, the font and placement seem a little off. You should make the title a little bit bigger and try using a different font, mess around a little, and see what looks good on it. If you check out the fonts in a Word or doc page, I recommend using the Quicksand or Shadows into Light font.

Rate- 8.75/10

Blurb- Your blurb is short but sweet. It introduces the main character and the trials which he will go through as well as his ultimate goal/wish. You tell the future giving the reader a glimpse of what to expect in the coming chapters. Good job!

Rate- 10/10

Plot/Grammar- Most books I've reviewed aren't original, and that's ok! As long as you add your twists, and character to it, you'll be fine....however, you came up with an entirely different plot! I haven't come across one Civil War/ werewolf novel on Wattpad. You introduce each character and give them a solid personality right off the bat. I can tell you are either very learned in this topic, your you did a lot of research! The many different terms you used in the chapters, especially the prologue impressed me! I love how you included the different traditions and how the werewolves interact with one another. There were only a few small grammar errors which I wouldn't worry too much about. I didn't find any typos but there are a few sentences that are missing words or use the wrong verb tense. One other thing I would highly recommend is that you put a warning or tag before the chapter that has more of a mature scene—chapter 2 in other words. I know you put the mature tag up which is good, but the mature tag could mean a lot of things; explicit language such as cussing/swearing, gore, intimate scenes, etc. Most authors would say why they put the mature tag on the copyright/ author's note page. If you don't want to do that, you could just say at the beginning of each chapter that there will be an intimate scene, a gory or triggering scene, etc.

Rate- 9/10

Character Development- Since you only have four chapters, obviously there won't be room for much character development.

Rate- N/A

Overall- I enjoyed reading what you had so far! It was a unique blend of paranormal and historical fiction. Consider playing around with your font for the title since the one that you have right now just doesn't seem to go with the cover. Watch out for minor grammar mistakes and punctuation. Think about putting a warning note or something similar before a mature scene.

Final Rate- 90/100

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