Reviewed by: Avid-ReaderOrWriter

Book title: My Captivity

Author's name: lilac_minded

Cover- I love your cover! It gives off a sci-fi vibe. However, I would recommend that you put your name in a darker color, it took a second glance before I found the author's name.

Rate- 10/10

Blurb- Your blurb is amazing, it reveals just the right information that a reader would need to understand this book and I love how it ends with an objective. Many writers end with a question but I love the closing sentence with the blurb.

Rate- 10/10

Plot- Once I finished reading the blurb, I was super excited to get into it. However, there are seven parts full of AI images. Personally I am not against using AI to make pictures but there are quite a lot of images. I would highly recommend that you just post the pictures of the characters as they show up in the story. There are way too many characters to remember and it's a bit of a hassle going back and forth from the characters page to the chapter to distinguish what characters look like. As for the originality of the story, I like it! It's interesting how you decided to have a sci-fi non-fictional thing going on here. I know of a few other authors who have used the same idea but it takes a good writer to come up with an actual good story. Your use of adjectives and adverbs are amazing as well! Some authors aren't very good at making the reader see what you (the writer) sees in your head, but you did a very good job with words! I found only a few minor typos, nothing really big so nothing to worry about.

Rate- 9.75/10 (mostly because there were too many characters to keep a mental image of in my head....like I said, I recommend having a picture of the character only when he/she appears in a part/chapter.

Ending- I really enjoyed the chapters! Your imagination is beautiful and it kept me captivated! Good job with what you have so far!

Cleaning it up- All I recommend it to make the character pages less and fix the minor typos

Final Rating- 90.75/100

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