Reviewed by: Avid-ReaderOrWriter

Book title: Love's First Whisper

Author's name: IrenicJ_stories

Cover- First off, let me just say how beautiful your cover is. Everyone knows everyone judges a book by its cover on Wattpad. However, the couple standing almost like silhouettes was a beautiful idea. I love the font as well. Having two different fonts could be too much for some covers but it fits yours very nicely. The only thing I would recommend it to make your subtitle a little bit larger. Your subtitle is smaller than the author name and usually, it's supposed to be larger. You can keep or change the font of the subtitle, it's totally up to you. Good job!

Rate- 9.9/10

Blurb- The blurb is a little long but the way you beautifully crafted the words made up for that. Your use of adjectives and descriptive words are displayed wonderfully here You got your point across to the reader. I would've liked to see a little more about the characters but that is just a minor detail. There is no need to write "| COMPLETED |" since you put up the green tag that already says completed. However, that is up to you. It's just a matter of making the blurb look neat. I also liked how you put the most impressive ratings up as well. Good job on the blurb!

Rate- 10/10

Character Development- Your short story is only 32 minutes long so there isn't much character development. However, I would like to point out the respect Aashvi and Abhik have for eachother. It is beautiful seeing that they love eachother so very much but are willing to wait.

Rate- N/A (Not long enough)

Plot/ Grammar- First off, I just want to say how this book literally defies the stereotype of wattpad. Most books on wattpad are romantic, mafia/werewolf/billionaire books filled with intense romance and passionate scenes. I loved the soft, cute, fluff short story you crafted. Sometimes, readers need to be reminded what true romance is. Not the wattpad type. Granted, there are some pretty good romances out their in wattpad, but yours hits differently. Your skill of being able to write so the reader sees is displayed wonderfully in your pages. Very good job. The only mishap I detected was when you put something in quotes, you put the comma behind the quote! As a punctuation and grammar perfectionist, I would highly, highly recommend that you fix those mistakes. You have— "Do you realise how tensed I am?",I asked—(chapter 3, paragraph 10). You could also change the tense to make it flow more. So your edited sentence should look liek this—"Do you realise how tense I am ?" I asked— there is no need to put a comma in that sentence. Other than that, there was nothing grammatically wrong.

Rate- 9.5/10

Overall- I believe this is one of the best short stories I've reviewed yet. I enjoyed the chapters and the romance between our main characters. The fact that this is a true story is makes it twice as better. The only thing I would recommend is that you make your subtitle a little bit larger and fix your grammar mistake. Awesome job on this!

Final Rate- 97/100

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