Reviewed by: Diverselyunique

Book Title: Confession letters

Author's Name: Dark_Ghostie

Title:
The title is very direct, it's literally implying that it's about confession letters. It's very intriguing and fits the content of the book, one who sees the title knows exactly what the book is going to be about.

Book cover:
It definitely does fit the entire theme of the book, it has a vintage look to it and seeing that the confession letters are from a while ago it definitely makes sense, it's eye catching. The font used is also very clever because it fits the title.

Blurb:
It's very direct and let's the reader know what the book is about, but seeing that your book is about a series of confession letters, you could quote a line from one of the letters that could serve as a cliffhanger or a hook . Or you could write something like
"twelve letters, ten people dead and police with no leads"
Something that could catch the reader's attention immediately and want read your book.

Pace:
The pace of your book was very pleasing, I don't think I have any problems with it. I liked that you didn't put so much context into the letters because had you done that then it would have taken away the whole point of it being letters. From the book we can already tell the kind of person the writer is, Usually we want the readers to be sympathetic towards the character or we want the readers to understand and favor our characters and to understand their emotions as well as intentions but in this case I don't know if that's what you were going for but if you were, it didn't succeed because it's alot of killings and of course we know that they were angry at these people and how they were treated during their school days but how could one hold so much hate to the point of torturing and killing people in different ways.

However I will say if you were presenting your characters as people who were just burning for revenge and didn't care what they did to get it then you did well because the thing that kept me going and reading was the amount of disbelief I had with the way they were rolling, like you're actually killing these people in gruesome ways? But above all you really made the confession letters, CONFESSION LETTERS. Well done!

However I would suggest that maybe in the beginning or the end that you put one or two scenes of how their school days were, just paint a picture for your readers so that they know what kind of school they went to and how they felt about their school so that your readers don't develop too much hatred for your characters.

Writing style:
You followed the letter format correctly, I didn't notice any Grammer or spelling errors which means your book is well edited. However I will suggest and this is only optional that you add maybe time and date for each letter just to give it a more aesthetic look that's just a suggestion and you don't have to take it, but otherwise well done. You used vivid descriptions when it came to expressing or narrating how each person died which is good because such content is what is found in Confession letters, there is no filter whatsoever when it comes to these kind of things.

Genre revelance:
It is general fiction and as well as True crime, you really did dive more into the true crime part.

Overall enjoyment:
I'm not really into books that involve violence or descriptive crime settings but I did enjoy your book because it was short and also left us on a cliffhanger, we want to know if School is going to die or Amethyst might have a change of heart and decide otherwise we want to know if the police will catch them, maybe they might have left a piece of evidence when they killed those people or Maybe Mr Geography 's fiancé left a letter before she commited suicide with hints about what happened the night she last heard Geography' s voice? I don't know but I hope you continue and I'll be looking forward to it

Thank you for choosing me to be your reviewer

Yours truly,
Diverselyunique