Reviewed by: ChristineAcedon

Book Title: Bite Me Tender

Author's Name: lemonsindecay

Cover: 10/10

I really like your cover and the way the title pops off of it. The font you use is amazing!

Title: 10/10

I like how the title very clearly alerts readers to a paranormal theme and works nicely with the theme of the book.

Blurb/Description: 10/10

You did well in writing your blurb. You managed to introduce your characters, the conflict, the setting and the stakes. It all melds together nicely and manages to capture the interest of your potential readers without giving away too much.

Creativity and originality: 10/10

You've got so many historical, mythological and pop culture references floating around your work, yet still manage to put your own twist on it. It comes together very well and there's not a single boring moment throughout.

Plot and Flow: 20/20

Everything flows together well. The pacing doesn't seem forced or too quick and the storyline is easy to follow.

Character Development: 20/20

I was not prepared to like Lucretia as much as I do. I expected to like her, but after hearing her speak, I'm officially half in love with her. The animosity between characters as well as the overall relationships between characters. You seem to have their backstories so well-developed as they go back in forth, referencing past events. As a reader, I felt so involved and invested in everything and the emotions and interactions came across as completely natural.

Writing style: 10/10

First Person story telling is usually my favorite point-of-view anyway, but I absolutely am in love with Lucretia's voice. She tells the story very well with her emotions in the moment shining through. The added sprinkle of her dark sense of humor throughout also goes a long way to making the story come together so nicely. Honestly, one of my favorite narrators of all time.

Grammar, spellings, etc.: 10/10

You've very clearly proofed your work very thoroughly. I didn't notice any mistakes throughout.

Overall: 100/100

I want to be able to give some sort of constructive criticism, but I just don't have any. Lucretia's voice makes even the more 'boring' parts entertaining and fun. It keeps your attention and makes you laugh. I'm not a huge fan of gore and even that didn't pull me away from the story.

I cannot wait to read more of their story. Side note: I'm going to need to know about Cabo...

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