The Ironic Life of Akame
About: A girl. A typical, normal teenager will suffer ❤️ problems when a boy appears.
Rating: 8,8/10
Feedback: I ❤️ IT! I literally am like sooooo excited for the next chapter. And like I absolutely ❤️ the trailer too. It has an incredible potential as a story! Some people will easily give up on therw stories but don't do that. Your story has great potential! Like big! I gave you a 8,8 cuz u have lots of spelling mistakes. And there is only one chapter so like I don't know much about the story yet.
My Recomendations:
Install: Grammarly! (Just look up on the web. It automatically corrects ur mistakes. I use it!)
Payments.
Oh and... As I mentioned in the intro u have to follow me, vote on every chapter of this book and tag three friends!
@wilmix14
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