Title: Blood Type R

Total Chapters: 12
Genre: Vampire
Currently: Ongoing
Author: charlottemallory

Thoughts:

Lear: The cover is dark which tells me something negative is about to occur in the book. Type R blood. I wonder what the R stands for.

Roland: Rare? Random? Ruby? Reset? Ready? So many possibilities.

Lear: So after reading the first chapter, I can see that the author has a lot to work on as far as quality goes. There were rephrases and incomplete sentences. I do not approve.

Roland: But her writing gets better in later chapters despite the first chapter being a bit messy.

Lear: The author does give a bit of an information dump in the second chapter.

Roland: Yeah that could probably be spread out a bit more. Nevertheless, the lore is quite interesting. I can't say I approve of the foul language used.

Lear: The setting for this story is quite interesting. I mean this takes place in year 2043. It's assumed that all the races-both supernatural and human- are at war with one another. If I was to think about this, I'll have to say that this story couldn't have taken place any other place then Earth.

Roland: I wonder if the humans in this story were to all get together with the witches, would they be able to regain a sort of balance alongside the lycans and vampires. Probably not because the lyans in this story are really strong. It's clear that the balance of power if shifted in their favor.

Lear: There must always be a balance in power between the supernatural and humans.

Roland: Let's talk characters!

Lear: Cora, I believe, is doing well handling the situation she's been placed in.

Roland: Considering being blackmailed into seducing an alpha, I'll have to say she is really strong willed and resilient. I mean I don't think I could keep myself strong mentally in the way she has done.

Lear: That's because you eat to many sweets. All the same, I can see Cora becoming a great fighter by the end of this story. One thing I noticed is that a lot of characters are being introduced, but they are not being described as much.

Roland: I noticed that too. I do suggest the author go back in her/his final draft and reread through the chapters to see where descriptions should be added and shouldn't.

Lear: I got to admit. Sava is a interesting name and character for a werewolf.

Roland: Oh do I sense you taking a fancy toward the silver haired beauty Mr. Lear?

Lear: *roll his eyes* I'm only saying her culture and traditions are very intriguing in my opinion. I've never came across anything as different as respecting their elders in such a way.

Roland: Well I liked the conflict between language interaction between Core and the alpha, who have a interesting name by the way. I can't even pronounce it. Haha.

Lear: Despite the weak first chapter, I feel like this story is one that do stand out from the rest of the others. It just need some heavy work in certain areas.

Roland: I have to say that I'm having trouble wrapping my head around the lycans true rulers. At first, I thought Ludo was the supreme ruler, but it turns out there's someone above him.

Lear: Yes that was a bit confusing.

Roland: Oren, can we talk a bit about him? He comes off a the villain type to me. However, he's only making Cora go through this is to benefit his family.

Lear: Yes, but he's going about it the wrong way. What happened to kindly another person to aid them?

Roland: *looks at Lear* You know the world doesn't work that way. It's a doggie dog world out there. (Pun intended haha)

Lear: Oren is wrong in his acts even to the point of putting his brother into the mix of kidnapping Cora, which is a little unclear of how he got into her house in chapter one. Which brings me to my next point: Where were her siblings when she was being kidnapped? If her kidnapper was alone, then where were they?

Roland: Overall, I enjoyed reading this story too. It needed some more descriptions I think. And maybe the characters could be flush out a bit more like Gally for example. She seem like a major part in Cora's early abduction. It would seem like they bonded a bit after they were both punished.

Lear: Which reminds me! You think Ludo would have had a translator from the very first start when meeting Cora for the first time.

Lear: A translator would have been a good back up plan to closed the language distance between the pair instead of leaving everything up to that family.

Roland: I do love and enjoy those Cora-Ludo moments. To me, that wad the most natural aspect that gave this story a realistic feeling.

Feel free to check this story out! As always, don't forget to ask any questions from the Deans. They will gladly answer them. ^~^

Stay tune for the next review.