CONTEST WINNER!!!
Lame excuse time: I didn't upload the winner's entry yesterday because I had company.
BUT! It is here now and I have chosen a winner. Before I reveal who, I would like to thank da_bunny_lover , AriStoat_SK , Cassians_girl , and hazeIIvsque for entering this competition. You guys went all out to create the best entry and I'll admit, they were all very creative.
Unfortunately, we can only have one winner. So! Without further ado...
DRUMROLL!!
The winner for this chat contest is hazeIIvsque !!
Let's take a look at their entry, shall we?
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(Cassian has entered the chatroom)
Cassian: Hey!
Cassian Andor: Who left a notebook here?
Cassian Andor: Anybody missing a notebook here?
Cassian Andor: Anyone?
Cassian Andor: Eh, I think I'll just wait.
(*spongebob narrator voice* one eternity later)
Cassian Andor: Come on... Isn't anyone going to claim this notebook?
Cassian Andor: Hmmm..
Cassian Andor: Come to think of it...
Cassian Andor: I guess it wouldn't hurt to look at it for a while.
Cassian Andor: Just a little peek won't hurt. *opens notebook*
Cassian Andor: Now, where should I look first?
(Bodhi Rook has entered the chatroom)
Bodhi Rook: Would you stop texting?! You're blowing up my notificatio- Whoa, whose notebook is that?
Cassian Andor: That's the problem - I don't know who it belongs to.
Bodhi Rook: I don't think it's a good idea to look through that notebook's contents-
Cassian Andor: Oh, shush, it will be quick. Besides, what could go wrong?
Bodhi Rook: Maybe you'll end up finding some really weird stuff.
Cassian Andor: Define 'weird.'
(K-2SO has entered the chatroom)
K-2SO: weird \ˈwird\ - an adjective that means 'unusual' or 'strange'. Also known as-
Cassian Andor: I know what weird means, K2!
K-2SO: Suuure.
K-2SO: Also, how about I simply suggest- FLIPPING THROUGH THE FORCING PAGES? That may provide some.... interesting content.
(Chirrut Îmwe has logged on)
Chirrut Îmwe: DO NOT USE THE FORCE'S NAME IN- oh, you were talking about that? Well, this is going to be interesting.
Cassian Andor: Okay, *hurriedly flips through pages* Here we go... OMIGODS! YOU WONT BELIEVE WHAT'S ON THIS PAGE!
Bodhi Rook: Well, what is it?
Cassian Andor: *clears throat*
Cassian Andor: Day #47 - Ships aren't canon yet. When will Jyn and Cassian finally mar-
Cassian Andor: Ahhhhh never mind, skipping that!
K-2SO: Come on! I wanna know what's on that page!
Cassian Andor: Trust me, you do not want to see what was written there!
Bodhi Rook: Is it mainly because of you and Jyn marryi-
Cassian Andor: SHUT UP!!!
K-2SO: Someone's denying their-
Cassian Andor: *dark aura* SHUT. UP. K2. Or I'll tell them what I found you trying to do to R2.
Chirrut Îmwe: What did he do?
Cassian Andor: Well, he was trying to throw him into a pit full of-
K-2SO: OKAY FINE I'LL SHUT UP NOW MOVE ONTO THE NEXT PAGE.
Cassian Andor: Well then. *clears throat*
Cassian Andor: Draft #2 there's a few paragraphs mostly talking about a series named 'The Starfall Legacy', never mind that, and then there's-
Cassian Andor: Day #47 - still waiting for Galennic to become canon- WAIT WHAT
(Orson Krennic has entered the chatroom)
(Galen Erso has entered the chatroom)
Orson Krennic: Would you four stop blowing up my notifica- DID YOU SAY GALENNIC?!
Galen Erso: *spittakes* GaLeNnIc?! I have to see! *lunges at notebook*
K-2SO: Nope, nope, nopity nope! *holds notebook out of Galen's reach*
Galen Erso: *jumps, trying to get notebook* Gimme it! GIMME IT! I WANNA KNOW WHATS IN THERE ABOUT GALENNIC!!!
Cassian Andor: This is almost too funny!
Chirrut Îmwe: It's like a little kid trying to reach a bowl of candy on top of a counter!
Bodhi Rook: I will never get how you're able to text on a phone and be able to describe things while you're unable to see!
(Jyn Erso has entered the chatroom)
Jyn Erso: Why did I hear Papa shouting- PBBBBBFFFFFTTTT AHAHAHAHAHAHA PAPA WHAT ARE YOU DOING!!!
Galen Erso: DONT JUST STAND THERE LAUGHING, DO SOMETHING!!!
Jyn Erso: WHAT SHOULD I DO?! YOU LOOK HILARIOUS JUST HANGING FROM K2'S ARM LIKE A LI'L MONKEY!!!
Orson Krennic: I'll have to admit - it does look funny, seeing you there trying to reach that notebook like an impatient little kid.
Galen Erso: OH FOR GOODNESS SAKE CAN SOMEONE HELP ME?!
(Lyra Erso has entered the chatroom)
Lyra Erso: Galen, dear, you forgot to use a comma- WHAT ARE YOU DOING?! GET DOWN FROM THAT DROID, NOW!
K-2SO: Ma'am, I am not just a droid! I'll have you know-
Galen Erso: AHA! *manages to tackle K-2SO and snatch the idea book from his hand* You're welcome!
K-2SO: NONONONONNONO DONT YOU DARE FLIP TO THAT PAGE-
Galen Erso: Ahahaha! Found it! Galen Erso: AGGH!
Jyn Erso: I GOT IT!
Galen Erso: K2 WAS IT NECESSARY TO TRIP ME?!
K-2SO: Well, you were about to look at a page which had extremely detailed angsty writing about you and-
Jyn Erso: SHUT UP IM TRYING TO LOOK THROUGH THE PAGES-
Jyn Erso: Wait, what's this?
Jyn Erso: Day #48 - Still trying to get over Jyn's death-
Jyn Erso: Wait, IM DEAD?!
Chirrut Îmwe: WEREN'T WE ALL?!
Galen Erso: THIS IS HIGHLY DISTURBING!
K-2SO: SOMETIMES I WONDER WHY GARETH EDWARDS GAVE US THIS FATE!!!
Bodhi Rook: This isn't the time to break the fourth wall, guys!
K-2SO: YOU JUST DID!!!
(Tris Prior has entered the chat room)
Tris Prior: Wait, you died too? Even though you were the main character?
Jyn Erso: Uhhh.... yeah. Why?
Tris Prior: Oh, thank goodness, I thought I was the only one! I feel you too, bro...
Jyn Erso: Wait....
Jyn Erso: *processing*
Jyn Erso: YOU'RE ALSO DEAD?!
Tris Prior: It's a long story. A story so long, it'd take a book trilogy and four movie adaptations.
Jyn Erso: Oh..
Tris Prior: Welp, gotta go.
(Tris Prior has logged off)
Jyn Erso: Well, that was weird.
Cassian Andor: You wanna know what I find weird? HOW WHOEVER OWNS THIS NOTEBOOK HAS KNOWLEDGE OF OUR CHATS, OUR LIVES, AND OUR LOVE LIVES!!!
Jyn Erso: Also, what's this thing about 'ocs' in here? Who the heck are Briara and Gaéle Tsien?
(Briara Tsien has logged on)
(Gaéle Tsien has logged on)
Briara Tsien: Sister, it's me! Please, you don't have to remain with the Empire! We've finally found each other!
Gaéle Tsien: Shut up! You're no sister of mine! Get away from me, Rebel Scum!
Briara Tsien: Gaéle, please! It doesn't have to be like this-
Gaéle Tsien: WILL YOU SHUT UP WITH ALL OF THIS 'PLEASE COME BACK TO THE GOOD SIDE' BULL?! I HAVE TO DEAL WITH TWO STUCK-UP IMPERIAL OFFICERS WHO THINK SO LOWLY OF MY STATUS AS A SIMPLE HIRED IMPERIAL ASSASIN AND DON'T GET ME STARTED ON DIRECTOR KRENNIC'S REALLY F***ED-UP LOVE LIFE WITH A CERTAIN SCIENTIST-
(Tarika Crowe has logged on)
(Ginne Nikols has logged on)
Tarika Crowe: Did you just call us-
Ginne Nikols: STUCK-UP?
(Wilhuff Tarkin has logged on)
(Governor Pryce has logged on)
Wilhuff Tarkin: STOP BLOWING UP MY NOTIFICATIONS I'M TRYING TO- wait, did you just mention Galennic?! *glares*
Governor Pryce: WHAT?! *pushes Tarkin aside* SOMEONE'S TRYING TO BREAK UP ME AND THE DIRECTOR?!
Tarika Crowe: Oh, hello there, Grand Moff and Governor! Just in time to-
Ginne Nikols: SHUSH IT, THEY DONT DESERVE TO KNOW WE CAME FROM ANOTHER CHAT-
Tarika Crowe: YOU JUST TOLD THEM THAT!!!
Ginne Nikols: I DON'T CARE-
Gaéle Tsien: *mutters* They're worse than the Director's messed up love life with his scienti-
Orson Krennic: Did she just say I have a really f***ed-up love life?
Wilhuff Tarkin: with a SCIENTIST?! *side-eyes Galen*
Gaéle Tsien: *glares* don't effing play dumb with me, director - do I have to count the many nights I can hear you making Galen moan beneath y-
Governor Pryce: *glares at Galen*
Wilhuff Tarkin: *glares even more darkly at Galen*
Galen Erso: 0-0
Galen Erso: When I said I wanted Galennic to happen several chapters ago...
Galen Erso: I didn't mean for it to be like how that newcomer described it.
Briara Tsien: Wait a second... *checks the chat name*
Briara Tsien: Oh force, I think we're in the wrong chat.
Chirrut Îmwe: DO NOT USE THE FORCE'S NAME IN VAIN!
Briara Tsien: Yep, we're definitely in the wrong chat.
(Briara Tsien has logged out.)
Gaéle Tsien: *glares* I've got my eye on you all.
(Gaéle Tsien has logged out.)
Tarika Crowe: Well then-
Ginne Nikols: -Ciao, losers.
(Tarika Crowe and Ginne Nikols have logged out)
Everyone: ...
Jyn Erso: Please tell me what they said isn't true-
Governor Pryce: ORSON CALLAN KRENNIC EXPLAIN WHAT IN THE FORCE'S NAME SHE WAS TALKING ABOUT-
Orson Krennic: IM BEING HONEST, IM NOT HAVING AN AFFAIR WITH GALE-
Galen Erso: ARE WE NOT GOING TO TALK ABOUT THE FACT THAT SHE SAID I WAS BENEATH Y-
Cassian Andor: THIS IS NOT THE TIME TO DISCUSS WHOEVER TOPS OR BOTTOMS IN GALENNIC-
Galen Erso: I WASN'T GOING TO TALK ABOUTH THA-
Wilhuff Tarkin: SURE YOU WEREN'T-
Jyn Erso: WHY IS EVERYBODY SHOUTING?!
Bodhi Rook: BECAUSE SOMEONE FROM ANOTHER CHAT CLAIMS KRENNY HERE HAS AN AFFAIR WITH YOUR FATHE-
Orson Krennic: DON'T YOU 'KRENNY' ME, YOU-
Galen Erso: I DIDN'T ASK FOR THIS, YOU KNOW!
Cassian Andor: *mutters* and to think this was all because of a notebook-
Everyone: WHAT WAS THAT?!
Cassian Andor: NOTHING!!!
(Yuri has entered that chat room)Yuri: Has anyone of you seen Victor Plisetsk-
Jyn Erso: CAN YOU NOT RIGHT NOW? THERE IS ONE HELL OF A DISCOURSE GOING ON HERE ABOUT MY FATHER'S RELATIONSHIP PROBLEMS-
Yuri: Okayyy....
Yuri: I'll just... practice some more ice-skating, I guess.
(Yuri has logged out)
Wilhuff Tarkin: I DIDN'T ASK TO BE PART OF THIS MADNE-
Orson Krennic: WELL I DIDN'T EXPECT THAT IN ANOTHER UNIVERSE, I HAVE A REALLY DETAILED LOVE LIFE WITH GALE-
Cassian Andor: GUYS I JUST FOUND MORE WRITING IN THIS BOOK AND HOLY BANTHAS YOU WONT BELIEVE WHAT ITS ABOUT!!!
Lyra Erso: SO? WE'RE STILL SHOUTING OVER MY HUSBAND'S APPARENT AFFAIRS!
Cassian Andor: YOU WON'T BELIEVE THIS - IT'S ABOUT SOMETHING CALLED KYLU-
(HazeIIvsque has entered the chat room)
HazeIIvsque: Has anyone seen my idea book? I left it on the dining table a while ago and now it's not there-
K-2SO: WHO CARES ABOUT YOUR FORCING IDEA BOOK WE HAVE TO FIND OUT WHO ON ACTUAL FORCING EARTH-
Chirrut Îmwe: *manages to interrupt K-2SO's text* DONT USE THE FORCES NAME IN VAIN!
Lyra Erso: YOU FORGOT THE APOSTROPHES!!!
(Baze Malbus has logged on)
Baze Malbus: FORGET ABOUT THE APOSTROPHES, LADY! WE HAVE TO FIND OUT WHO OWNS THIS NOTEBOOK-
HazeIIvsque: Uh, guys-
Everyone: WHAT?!
HazeIIvsque: ...that's my idea book you're messing around with.
Everyone: ....
Everyone: ...oh.
Bodhi Rook: Well, that explains the strange writings of rants, those stories about a 'legacy of stars' and some plans to make some 'special' ships cano-
HazeIIvsque: YOU LOOKED THROUGH MY NOTEBOOK?!
Cassian Andor: I- I couldn't help it.
HazeIIvsque: *glares* You didn't see anything did you?
Cassian Andor: *looks at Bodhi*
Bodhi Rook: *shrugs*
Galen Erso: *looks away and tries, and fails, to hide his blush*
Orson Krennic: *growls and tries not to look at Galen and Pryce*
Governor Pryce: *won't stop angrily glaring at Galen; probably is planning to do something bad to him*
Chirrut Îmwe: *coughs slightly*
Baze Malbus: *nudges Chirrut*
Jyn Erso: *raises eyebrow at everyone*
Lyra Erso: *places head in hands*
Cassian Andor: Uh.... yeah, we didn't see anything.
HazeIIvsque: *raises eyebrow* Judging by the huge amount of recent activity in this chat, it doesn't seem like that.
Cassian Andor: Oh, about that... we were just... um-
Chirrut Îmwe: Having a discourse about-
Bodhi Rook: - how the Empire -
Jyn Erso: - should just -
Orson Krennic: - become a huge -
K-2SO: - piece of -
Wilhuff Tarkin: - amazing -
Baze Malbus: - titan-fighting -
(Eren has logged on)
Eren: TITANS!
(Baze Malbus has kicked Eren out of the chat)
Galen Erso: - bunch of -
Jyn Erso: - chat room fighters.
HazeIIvsque: Okay...
HazeIIvsque: Sounds fake, but...
HazeIIvsque: Well then, *takes notebook from Jyn's hands* I'll just... go now... I have tons of fanfics and characters to work on. See ya.
(HazeIIvsque has logged out)
Everyone: ...
Bodhi Rook: We should never speak of this again.
Chirrut Îmwe: Agreed.
Cassian Andor: The Galennic though.
Orson Krennic: *glares at Cassian*
Galen Erso: *still blushing heavily*
Governor Pryce: *still glaring at Galen* I've. Got. My. Eye. On. You.
Jyn Erso: That Tris girl was sorta special-sounding y'know, like she was... Divergent.
K-2SO: Oh, shush it, you all.
(K-2SO has kicked everyone else out)
K-2SO: Ah, peace and quiet-K-2SO: Wait, why do I hear screami-
K-2SO: GALEN PLEASE DON'T TELL ME GOVERNOR PRYCE IS TRYING TO KILL YOU IM GETTING THERE RIGHT NOW!
(K-2SO has logged off)
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Awesome entry! I love how you used your four Rogue One OCs, a character from Divergent, and two anime characters. I'll also have you know that you won 2nd place for most characters in a single chapter for this book (19), and 2nd place for largest word count in a chapter aside from author notes (2060).
I absolutely loved how you made the characters constantly cut each other off as they argued over the notebook. Then their explaination on what they were doing to your notebook was superb! And I'll admit, I did not see Galen hanging from K2 like a monkey coming.
So! Prizes for your win! Well the most obvious is I will emphasize the Galennic. Secondly, there will be more Jassian because I have really deprived that ship. Third, one your OCs may appear at some point again in this story. Finally, the notebook is now book canon and the characters will more or less likely go after it to look at it.
For everyone else, thank you so much for entering! All your entries were amazing and made judging this contest extremely tough.
Please go support hazeIIvsque and their content!
p.s. Any Yuri!!! on Ice fans, I left the text the way it was so don't get triggered about Victor's last name.
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