The Lost City
The Lost City
By: MelodyCarson8055
Genre: Fantasy
Reviewer: KaitlinJackisch
Rating: 4.25/5.
Review:
At first glance, the cover is beautiful and really catches the eye. I think that the font could be a little bigger to make it really look professional and easy to read. The story description could use a little bit of work because 75% of it is just questions. I see what you were trying to do, but I think that it was a little overdone.
As I was reading through, I couldn’t help but notice how beautifully it was written. It has great flow, but I think at times adjectives were a little overused and it took away from the story itself.
I would pay attention to when new dialog starts because that should be a new paragraph. I wasn’t sure if that was how it was typed out, or if Wattpad did that with a glitch of some sort.
I really enjoyed Arabella and her dialog with her Mother because it was so realistic and really brought us back to the time and place that this was set in.
Other than these few things, I think that this book definitely deserves a lot of reads and votes because it was a wonderful read!
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