Society

By Eddy622

Rating: 3/5

Society

I think the overall idea of tackling racist issues is beautiful and powerful. Your story really sheds light on what is still going on today which is something that this world really needs!

I liked the opening scene of Gwen walking to the private school and how you described how she wouldn't fit in at all. It really set the tone of the whole story.

As I was reading through, I noticed that there are a lot of grammatical errors. Not just typos but actually using incorrect words. I got the overall just of it, but it made it a little difficult to read.

I enjoyed that there are so many main characters in this book and they are of every background. I think the dialog could have been a little better between them all and for the bullies.

I know that this book still needs to be edited, but that is really the main reason why it's not getting a higher score.