Queen of Ace

By: hottiesoftie

Genre: Chicklit

Reviewer: KaitlinJackisch

Rating: 3.75/5

Review:

Everything about this book on the outside was absolutely stunning. Your cover and graphics were great. At first, I thought the description was great, but I was totally thrown off by how the problem arose in Stephen’s office with Henry. I didn't have any hint to how the plot was going to play out, and sometimes that's good, but in this case, it was confusing. I think the timeline was a little rushed. I kept trying to go back and see if this was supposed to be a really short story for it to all happen this quickly.

The opening scene was set up very nicely, but I wish there was a little bit more depth to the character in the beginning instead of just hopping forward right into her arriving at her interview.

You did really well with developing your main characters and characters we aren't supposed to like... Like Henry sucks and he can leave.

Other than those few things and a few grammatical and tense errors, this is a very intriguing story that I would probably continue to find out where exactly you were going to take all of the characters and the issues that arose.