I Found Him on Wattpad

By: dNovelFreak

Genre: mystery

Reviewer: KaitlinJackisch

Rating: 2/5

Review:

I was really excited about this book because of the title and the blurb. The cover kind of confused me because it looks like a fantasy, but it made it so I didn't know what I was going to find when I started reading.

Immediately, I saw a lot of grammatical errors and interesting word choices. Like normally people say "turn down the TV." Not "reduce the volume." I also noticed that the tenses we're being switched back and forth from present to past that I was getting whiplash.

I think the idea is great because I love drama. It has a telenovela feel to it, but I would see if there is someone to edit your book.