Dear Transient

By: Dreams_writer20499

Genre: Romance

Rating: 3/5

Reviewer:  ThoughtfulSushi

Review:

I'd like to start off by saying I really love your style of writing. It's almost poetic in a sense and quite refreshing. It gives me the feeling of being told a story rather than being emerged in one which is unique and honestly inspiring. In addition, I enjoyed that you took a different approach to a rich kid's life and the struggle of loneliness. I haven't read many stories where the rich kid isn't out of control because of the loneliness. Good job!

Even though I enjoyed the plot and story concept it was hard for me to truly get into it. The grammar is inconsistent and the tense continuously switches between present and past. It's a common problem and one of my own writing has suffered until I was made aware. Many Wattpad users post and then never take the time to reread what they wrote days, weeks, even months later. Rereading and editing after posting serve two purposes; cleans up your work and helps it be discovered by new readers. Weekday evenings and weekend mornings are best. I would also suggest trying the Grammarly app or internet add-on for cleaning up the grammar.

Like I stated above, the story, plot and even the characters are wonderful and are captivating to the reader. It's a story worth telling and with a little elbow grease will be so beautiful it will make those who read it forget their problems for a little while.