1960 London Love

By: MAzhaan3005

Genre: Historical Romance

Rating: 3.75/5

Review by KaitlinJackisch

Review:

This story is so creative and different. The way that you wrote it as a story being told to another is very interesting to me and creates a depth to the book. I did want to mention that the way Meera just lets in this stranger into her home was a little iffy to me, even though he had the picture. If a stranger walked up to me with a picture I'd be wondering how they got it and why they sought me out.

Reading through, there were a lot of grammatical errors and some random words added in at times that didn't need to be there like right in the first paragraph. At times I had to go back and reread what I had just read.

Overall, your writing is beautiful and I enjoyed your descriptions of places and actions. For example: "Nursing the rim of the glass", " Depressed youth like me", and "Those many wrinkles of time". Those phrases really caught my attention!

I think once you go through and edit a lot of it, that it would bring this rating up, but great job!