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So, i've decided to reread TNP, POT and OOTS and rewrite some of it. In this book, i'm gonna share my idea's and such. You can always leave behind some idea's or suggestions too, and maybe, i'll include them.
Don't expect a full rewrite, i don't want to break any author's rights and also, three full series is just a lot to rewrite. So it'll more be small changes in chapters and such. Hope you'll enjoy this one! I'm sure not looking forward to rereading two of my least favourite series, but i'm gonna do it anyways.
Here are all the things i want to change:
TNP:
• The dark forest won't be introduced in The new prophecy, but in Power of three.
• Some of Bramble's chapters will change so he's less of a complete jerk and also in a way that the dark forest isn't important in his chapters.
• There will be an actual apology between Squirrel and Bramble
• more focus on friendships (like Squirrel, Shrew and Ash, or Leaf, Sorrel and Moth)
• more focus on Feathertail and her feelings towards Crow in her chapters
• some Crowfeather chapters maybe?
• some Squirrel, Leaf and Bramble chapters will be removed for Crow or Feather chapters for example.
• LeafxCrow will be more flashed out and less sudden.
POT:
• Lionpaw will introduce us to the dark forest
• Make Lion chapters better, maybe remove a few.
• Let one of the three stay in the clan during Outcast (most likely Holly)
•Less Holly chapters in and after Outcast bc they're similar to Lion's chapters and that way her secrets will be better hidden/make more sense.
• Make Ashfur's villainarc less out of nowhere, but it also won't be too obvious so the Plot twist will still stand.
• include some Breezepelt chapters in and after Outcast.
• slightly change the Fire scene so Ash character is more like in the current arc
OOTS:
• Make Dove's chapters a bit more interesting.
• make Bumble more of a "nice guy" so his character change after OOTS is better understandable.
• include Holly chapters after her return
• little but more focus on Millie and Blossomfall's relation, cause a lot of that also came out of nowhere.
So again, feel free to leave some idea's of your own or suggestions. I'll post a few more flashed out scene's i might include in the rewrite later this week. (If someone wants to work together on this project feel free to contact me)
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